fic: How's the Leg? (Gonzalo Higuaín/Ezequiel Garay, PG-13)

[txorakeriak]

Title: How's The Leg?
Author: txorakeriak
Fandom: Football RPS, Real Madrid
Pairing: Gonzalo Higuaín/Ezequiel Garay
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I'm a lying bastard and made this all up. I don't claim to know any of the players I write about, they're most definitely not mine, and this very probably didn't happen. No payment involved, no offence intended. This

Comments

[still_glorious]

omg i love this. I sooooo love this. That is the best dialogue fic EVER and I usually hate those. Great choice of words and you mentioned to tell a whole story with just dialoge that is fucking brilliant. And it's insanely cute as well. Absolutely adore this!! Post this at whitelightblue please! It's gonzalo concerned about one's leg ;)
Absolutely wonderful!

[txorakeriak]

Yay, thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this so much! :D Will post it at the community ASAP, thanks for the reminder! (I keep forgetting that there is a brilliant community about Argie fic - and both Gonzalo and Ezequiel are Argies! *facepalm*) Thank you!!!

[tonstant_weader]

Ahhh, this was great. :) The dialogue felt natural and had a really great build for the final payoff at the end. It was light and fluffy as meringue, while still giving characters some tentativeness, frustration and depth. This was a delight to read, thank you!

[txorakeriak]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this! Dialogue is one of the few things about writing that I don't particularly suck at, so I was glad that we got a challenge for dialogue fic. :) Thanks for your kind comment, and I'm especially happy that you thought the fic felt natural and had some depth despite being just dialogue. That's exactly what I wanted to achieve!