067 - Two to Go

Nov 26, 2010 22:55

Two to Go

Synopsis: Jenny's prophetic dreams come together to paint a tragic picture -- Tara's sudden demise. And when this shocking event sends Willow over the edge into the darkest corners of black magic, it's up to Jenny, Giles and the Coven to find a way to stop her before it's too late.

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!multi-episodic, !episodic, season: 6, rating: pg-13, 067 - two to go

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always_a_boom November 28 2010, 00:36:17 UTC
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THE EPIC EPIC AWESOMENESS

IT HAS ~BEGUN~

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PROPHETIC DREAMS ARE NOT GOOD THINGS JENNY, GO GO GO. Seriously for a few comments there I was like GAHHHHHH GO GO ACTION JENNY, DO A SPELL AND FIX THINGS, GO GO GO. But then adorbs bb!Giles walked on and I was like d'awwwwwwww XD

TARAAAAAAAAAAA :'( GODDAMN JOSS KILLING WOMEN AND LESBIANS ABOUND Even though I was not the biggest Willow fan at this point it's still so painful watching her try to bring Tara back :'(

Total nerd, but I loved Vivian hugging Jenny <3 I THINK THEY WOULD HAVE A FANTASTIC RELATIONSHIP, all respect and teacher-student and full of witchy awesome. But whatevs ( ... )

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calendar_woman November 28 2010, 18:48:53 UTC
HEEEEE! IT'S TIME IT'S TIME IT'S TIME!!! I FINALLY get to write this epic-ass showdown. I'm surprised I haven't just exploded from pure glee yet, LOL.

ANYWAY - I'm SO happy you enjoyed this little 'lead-in' chapter. I always wondered how things happened on Giles' side in canon -- how he became involved with the Coven in the first place. (My take on it? He was totally nailing one of the witches. Because, let's face it -- after he lost Jenny, he became kind of a slut. :P)

Total nerd, but I loved Vivian hugging Jenny <3 I THINK THEY WOULD HAVE A FANTASTIC RELATIONSHIP, all respect and teacher-student and full of witchy awesome. YOU ARE TOO CUTE. Hehehe. I'm actually really looking forward to utilizing Vivian a little more -- I really do want to build on her relationship with Jenny. Even Jenny needs someone to look up to and learn from. :)

I always loved how Willow literally absorbed all that power from the books, with that fantastic imagery of the words streaming up her skin - and, from Giles' POV, it's so powerful, like she's using ( ... )

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myfidgetball November 28 2010, 02:12:58 UTC
Holy shitballs, the epic battle has begun!!!! Yes, yes, yes, motherfucking YEEESSSS! Jenny is a BAMF, Giles is such a sexy-ass husband, Willow is a sick, twisted puppy, and you are a freaking GENIUS!

Now that all of the labels have been properly cast, lets move on the the show!

EEEEEEEEK! More dreams! And Jenny can't sleep!!! Poor thing. :-( She needs all the sleep she can get... especially now... hmmmm curious... :-D

Oh, and poor Tara. This one totally shocked me during the show. It was so sad/traumatizing/unexpected/etc. that is to say it was so Joss *cough*evilgeniusbastard*cough*. But I will say, the evil that even unleashed in Willow was rather epic. And the scene with Warren in the woods - AWESOME and icky, at the same time ( ... )

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calendar_woman November 28 2010, 19:15:47 UTC
Thank you! HEEEE. And YES, THE EPISODES I'VE BEEN DYING TO WRITE HAVE FINALLY ARRIVED. Hahaha, jeez it sure took long enough! I remember even back when I was writing the end of season three and the beginning of season four, starting to plan these chapters out, just getting insanely giddy and bouncy at the mere thought of getting to write all this.

ANYWAY. I'm glad you liked this chapter! As I mentioned above, I was always personally really curious as to how Giles got involved with all of this in the first place. So it was fun to get to write the unseen side of it, with Jenny thrown in. :D

EEEEEEEEK! More dreams! And Jenny can't sleep!!! Poor thing. :-( She needs all the sleep she can get... especially now... hmmmm curious... :-D Hahaha! Ahh, my little conspiracy theorist -- I love you ;) I really did want to have Jenny lose sleep over this, leading up to the battle -- not just because of the dreams, but because, in my mind, she'd be blaming herself for all of this. As different as she and Giles were, I always felt that in this ( ... )

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repowoman24 November 28 2010, 05:19:02 UTC
This.. Oh my God.. I am seriously so freaking excited for the next chapter just because of how AWESOME this was ( ... )

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calendar_woman November 28 2010, 19:39:59 UTC
Heeee! Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter!

I know how excited YOU are to write Grave and can I just say, THAT EXCITEMENT IS SPREADING LIKE WILDFIRE! Hehe! YAAAAAY! I'm so happy you guys are all right there with me on this. I know I've said it a gazillion times before, but I was SO SO ready to write these two chapters. I've only been planning them since... forever, it seems, LOL. I had the actual ending of 'Grave' written out in May, and I've been slowly planning how I wanted to 'execute' these chapters for close to a year now. So, suffice it to say, I'm so excited to be where I am in this story right now. And even more excited that I have you guys to share it with. :D :D :D

I loved the image of how Giles looked in his PJ's and all that. He is so cute. I think I need a Giles just for that added cuteness in my life. Hell.. EVERYBODY could use a Giles in their life. Hehe, thanks! I loved Giles' little pajama sets we saw on him occasionally. They always made him look so darn boyish and precious. And I ( ... )

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calendar_woman November 28 2010, 19:45:07 UTC
HI! Hehehe. I always love it when you pop up in my feedback thread!

And I'm so happy you enjoyed this! Been waiting a long time to write these chapters, so I'm very excited to get to share them with you guys. FINALLY, lol.

I absolutely love the way you've fitted Jenny into the Coven so seamlessly, brilliant writing on your behalf :) Thank you so much! I've really enjoyed that aspect of season six. They barely touched on it in the show, so I was thrilled at the prospect of getting to expand on it. :)

I thought it was particularly well done in 'Fortune Teller' as well, which by the way I think is my new favourite of mine! But I'll gush about that in the appropriate feedback slot :) Awww, well thank you! I really enjoyed writing that one as well -- it was fun getting to delve into Jenny's family history, and getting to tinker around with Angel's past. :D ( ... )

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disney_addict November 28 2010, 18:41:24 UTC
pardon me while I keyboard mash for a moment.
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You...I can't...
WORDS CANNOT EVEN DESCRIBE!
You have rendered me completely and utterly speachless typless?!!!

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^^ That's pretty much how my brain is functioning right now. ie. not at all.
And YOU, madame, are the one responsible for that!

This is probably going to have very little semblance to a coherent response.
Just to warn you.

I LOVE how you dealt with EVERY-FUCKING-THING in this!
GAWD!!!
I'M HAVING A MINOR MAJOR INTERNAL/EXTERNAL FREAKOUT!

Okay. So in an attempt to have this make sense:
The beginning was wonderful. I like how Jenny's vision/dreams got all strung together and she did the while 'Inner-Eye Elements' thingamabob. Fabulous.
sidebar: Giles in pyjamas=cutest image EVER. When they showed him wearing the full set in The Dark Age I actually laughed out loud. Giles would be the kind of man to not only own a pair of blue pinstripe ( ... )

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calendar_woman November 28 2010, 19:57:12 UTC
HEEEEEEEE! Thank you SO SO MUCH!! I'm so excited you guys are all digging this latest chapter, because I've been DYING to write it forever. :D

The beginning was wonderful. I like how Jenny's vision/dreams got all strung together and she did the while 'Inner-Eye Elements' thingamabob. Thank you!! I actually specifically set up the whole 'inner-eye' thing as well as the Five Elements a few chapters ago, with this finale in mind. I always remembered the way Giles had an 'inner eye' on what was going on between Xander and Willow while he was kinda half-conscious, so I wanted to expand on it a little. :D

Giles in his pajamas is the cutest thing ever! I wish they would have shown him in them more on the show, hehehe. But then again, I think that man would look fabulous in pretty much anything. So maybe I'm not the best judge there. ;)

Plus poor, tired Jenny. She and Giles both take everything on their own shoulders, and blame themselves for everything. :( I always figured Jenny and Giles were a lot alike in that respect. You could see it ( ... )

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