067 - Two to Go

Nov 26, 2010 22:55

Two to Go

Synopsis: Jenny's prophetic dreams come together to paint a tragic picture -- Tara's sudden demise. And when this shocking event sends Willow over the edge into the darkest corners of black magic, it's up to Jenny, Giles and the Coven to find a way to stop her before it's too late.

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!multi-episodic, !episodic, season: 6, rating: pg-13, 067 - two to go

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calendar_woman November 28 2010, 19:57:12 UTC
HEEEEEEEE! Thank you SO SO MUCH!! I'm so excited you guys are all digging this latest chapter, because I've been DYING to write it forever. :D

The beginning was wonderful. I like how Jenny's vision/dreams got all strung together and she did the while 'Inner-Eye Elements' thingamabob. Thank you!! I actually specifically set up the whole 'inner-eye' thing as well as the Five Elements a few chapters ago, with this finale in mind. I always remembered the way Giles had an 'inner eye' on what was going on between Xander and Willow while he was kinda half-conscious, so I wanted to expand on it a little. :D

Giles in his pajamas is the cutest thing ever! I wish they would have shown him in them more on the show, hehehe. But then again, I think that man would look fabulous in pretty much anything. So maybe I'm not the best judge there. ;)

Plus poor, tired Jenny. She and Giles both take everything on their own shoulders, and blame themselves for everything. :( I always figured Jenny and Giles were a lot alike in that respect. You could see it the couple of times they were split up on the show -- he blamed himself for the whole Eyghon thing, and she beat herself up about the whole Angelus thing. For how different they were, they were exactly the same in all the right ways -- perfect ingredient for a long-lasting relationship. If only Joss didn't suck so much, LOL.

The watching of Willow sobbing over Tara is ALWAYS heartbreaking, and then them watching her in the crystal ball going evil. GOD. It was so fabulously written, and charged with emotions and all of that good stuff that I'm running out of words with which to tell you how much I adore you. Thank you, hehehe! That scene with Willow trying to bring Tara back is SO heartbreaking, and a lot of the credit there goes to Aly Hannigan. She's a FANTASTIC crier. Her crying always breaks me, it's just so so sad. Also, I really enjoyed the chance to bring back the Orb, basically as a plot device to let them 'peek in' on what was happening during "Villains." That whole season six finale was one killer 3-parter. (4-parter, I guess, if you count 'Seeing Red.')

"I'm always with you." I'm always yours. <3 (I will never see that line and not mentally complete it with that.) Awwww! Hehehe, you are too cute. I did so love writing OMWF -- for how much of a labor of love it was, it ended up being a lot of fun to write those songs. :D

(And Giles makes them do an extra protection spell for Jenny. LOVE.) Hahaha! Well, he wouldn't be Giles if he wasn't a worrywart. ;)

AND THE END. I AM SO HAPPY YOU ENJOYED THE END! I had that image, of Jenny standing there all badass in her red sweater and jeans and long dark hair, in my head for AGES. I have been literally so antsy as I wrote this entire season, wanting to just skip right to these moments I'm writing right now, LOL. So suffice it to say, I'm happy you guys have stuck it out with me this long and are still enjoying the story as much as I'm enjoying writing it.

Thank you again, hon, so very much! As soon as I hit reply to this, I will be back writing "Grave," so keep refreshing! Hahaha. I should have it finished by tonight. :D :D :D

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