Ouuuuh~, Ina's first Nc-17 fic. I almost feel nervous to read it, how exciting!!!
My baby's grown so fast D8
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Okay, quote time ^^'
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Minho was half dead on a couch.
...XD (It's supposed to be angst, but I'm laughing at the very first occasion ^^'
Kibum's lips slowly moved to a very private part of his hyung's body.
Oh! Here's the 'private part' thing! The most obscene word used in here, right? XD (I'm not laughing at you, just so you know! I seriously prefer this kind of Nc-17.)
Kibum heard a yelp when he managed to get what he wanted to spill out of the older boy.
...*reads it again*... OOOH! He came. XD *so slow* I love how you REALLY don't use obscene words. (And that's not sarcastic!)
"Don't misunderstand," Kibum smirked. "I don't love you yet,"
..Nice U_U
He hadn't even let his own boyfriend, Minho, do anything like this to him before. Then he let his bestfriend...
:o
"Don't get any weird ideas in your head. You're not the one I love,"
Gosh this is so intense! Not in the nc-17-way but in its development, even though it's not that long! I think it's how Kibum's so enigmatic, you can't know what he feels and then you start reading eargerly to get something from him, but he doesn't let anything show
( ... )
I actually have an account for my fluffy/happy OTPs fics and one for more like...angsty and/or NC-17 not-necessarily-OTP fics. I'm really sorry!!
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I'm glad you noticed the 'yet'! This tiny little word is the only one that makes me consider writing a sequel! XD
Well, in my head, all the Kibum's story and emotions are clear but I didn't write them on purpose. I wanted to keep material to write a sequel if I felt like it. If I don't write anything else...then it's left for you to imagine whatever you like! XD
Hmm, why would Minho be older than Jonghyun?! Did I write anything wrong?! @.@
I doubt I'll start a chaptered fic with this (I always take forever to update...) but I might write a sequel!
I hope you'll read it if I do!
Thank your very much for reading and leaving a comment! ♥
You're lily_ina? I know you! I just don't know where from, but I do! xD
I could tell you were not spilling the beans on Key's feelings on purpose, and I admire you for this because I am someone who can't write a fic without completely unveiling the characters' emotions, however freak they might be *which's not Kibum's case here, I'm just telling lol*. I hope me noticing your little bridge to a sequel will help make up your mind! haha xD
And hm, it may be me being terribly slow *don't blame me though, it's near 2am here*, but I thought Minho was older than Jonghyun from this:
He nuzzled the Minho's neck, searching for comfort or whatever he needed to feel.
"You're tired," The older simply said. "Get some rest," (isn't it Minho saying this?)
"I'm sorry," Jonghyun sobbed and Minho couldn't quite catch what he said.
I'll be very happy with a sequel. I'll be even more happy if JongKey somehow make it into being together in the end! But nevermind my bias. xD♥
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My baby's grown so fast D8
.........
Okay, quote time ^^'
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Minho was half dead on a couch.
...XD (It's supposed to be angst, but I'm laughing at the very first occasion ^^'
Kibum's lips slowly moved to a very private part of his hyung's body.
Oh! Here's the 'private part' thing! The most obscene word used in here, right? XD
(I'm not laughing at you, just so you know! I seriously prefer this kind of Nc-17.)
Kibum heard a yelp when he managed to get what he wanted to spill out of the older boy.
...*reads it again*... OOOH! He came. XD *so slow*
I love how you REALLY don't use obscene words. (And that's not sarcastic!)
"Don't misunderstand," Kibum smirked. "I don't love you yet,"
..Nice U_U
He hadn't even let his own boyfriend, Minho, do anything like this to him before. Then he let his bestfriend...
:o
"Don't get any weird ideas in your head. You're not the one I love,"
Oh, even nicer U_U
"He doesn't know about me suc ( ... )
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I'll be waiting for you next fic then! ;)
*is almost 18 and is kind of excited about it yay!*
*is incoherent*
So...was it okay??! Do you think it's worth to be posted on communities? 8[
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IT'S MORE THAN THAT!! It's really good (sad, but good!)
Come on, gain some confidence!! :) (Yay, I know, look who's talking ^^')
And leaving things to our imagination is better than dictating everything XD
But it's my opinion *rolls eyes*
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I LOVE YOU!!!
*BREATHLESS*
*IS STILL PRESSING SHIFT*
*IS HAPPY*
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Thank you for reading!
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I actually have an account for my fluffy/happy OTPs fics and one for more like...angsty and/or NC-17 not-necessarily-OTP fics. I'm really sorry!!
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I'm glad you noticed the 'yet'! This tiny little word is the only one that makes me consider writing a sequel! XD
Well, in my head, all the Kibum's story and emotions are clear but I didn't write them on purpose. I wanted to keep material to write a sequel if I felt like it. If I don't write anything else...then it's left for you to imagine whatever you like! XD
Hmm, why would Minho be older than Jonghyun?! Did I write anything wrong?! @.@
I doubt I'll start a chaptered fic with this (I always take forever to update...) but I might write a sequel!
I hope you'll read it if I do!
Thank your very much for reading and leaving a comment! ♥
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I could tell you were not spilling the beans on Key's feelings on purpose, and I admire you for this because I am someone who can't write a fic without completely unveiling the characters' emotions, however freak they might be *which's not Kibum's case here, I'm just telling lol*. I hope me noticing your little bridge to a sequel will help make up your mind! haha xD
And hm, it may be me being terribly slow *don't blame me though, it's near 2am here*, but I thought Minho was older than Jonghyun from this:
He nuzzled the Minho's neck, searching for comfort or whatever he needed to feel.
"You're tired," The older simply said. "Get some rest," (isn't it Minho saying this?)
"I'm sorry," Jonghyun sobbed and Minho couldn't quite catch what he said.
I'll be very happy with a sequel. I'll be even more happy if JongKey somehow make it into being together in the end! But nevermind my bias. xD♥
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I'll see if I can write that sequel~ Please look forward to it if it comes out someday!
You're right O.O I did write the older I'll go correct that right now! Thank you so much for pointing it out!!!
XD I'll see what I can do for the Jongkey ending!
Thank you again ♥
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Thank you for reading though~
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I added this story into my memories~
♥
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OH! (Sorry I'm so slow and stupid ^^')
Thank you!! <3
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Please tell me this is not the end. This is practically screaming sequel!!!!
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