Gosh this is so intense! Not in the nc-17-way but in its development, even though it's not that long! I think it's how Kibum's so enigmatic, you can't know what he feels and then you start reading eargerly to get something from him, but he doesn't let anything show.
And Jonghyun, the way he insists to have a proper answer from Kibum but doesn't, I don't know, I find it different because usually *in other fics I mean* he would keep it to himself and brainstorm on it alone.
I'm all the way for JongKey and I had to ignore both Jongho and Onkey, but I would really like to know the outcome to this. Mainly because of two details: Kibum said he doesn't love JOnghyun yet, however after that he says Jonghyun's not the one he loves. Leads me to think that he considers taking things further with Jonghyun *despite saying it was just an one shot*, and that maybe he can fall in love with him...? lol I'm brainstormin myself xD
Also, is Minho older than Jonghyun here? O.o
Anyways, I loved this, please consider writing a sequel *or even starting a chaptered fic with this*!
I actually have an account for my fluffy/happy OTPs fics and one for more like...angsty and/or NC-17 not-necessarily-OTP fics. I'm really sorry!!
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I'm glad you noticed the 'yet'! This tiny little word is the only one that makes me consider writing a sequel! XD
Well, in my head, all the Kibum's story and emotions are clear but I didn't write them on purpose. I wanted to keep material to write a sequel if I felt like it. If I don't write anything else...then it's left for you to imagine whatever you like! XD
Hmm, why would Minho be older than Jonghyun?! Did I write anything wrong?! @.@
I doubt I'll start a chaptered fic with this (I always take forever to update...) but I might write a sequel!
I hope you'll read it if I do!
Thank your very much for reading and leaving a comment! ♥
You're lily_ina? I know you! I just don't know where from, but I do! xD
I could tell you were not spilling the beans on Key's feelings on purpose, and I admire you for this because I am someone who can't write a fic without completely unveiling the characters' emotions, however freak they might be *which's not Kibum's case here, I'm just telling lol*. I hope me noticing your little bridge to a sequel will help make up your mind! haha xD
And hm, it may be me being terribly slow *don't blame me though, it's near 2am here*, but I thought Minho was older than Jonghyun from this:
He nuzzled the Minho's neck, searching for comfort or whatever he needed to feel.
"You're tired," The older simply said. "Get some rest," (isn't it Minho saying this?)
"I'm sorry," Jonghyun sobbed and Minho couldn't quite catch what he said.
I'll be very happy with a sequel. I'll be even more happy if JongKey somehow make it into being together in the end! But nevermind my bias. xD♥
And Jonghyun, the way he insists to have a proper answer from Kibum but doesn't, I don't know, I find it different because usually *in other fics I mean* he would keep it to himself and brainstorm on it alone.
I'm all the way for JongKey and I had to ignore both Jongho and Onkey, but I would really like to know the outcome to this. Mainly because of two details: Kibum said he doesn't love JOnghyun yet, however after that he says Jonghyun's not the one he loves. Leads me to think that he considers taking things further with Jonghyun *despite saying it was just an one shot*, and that maybe he can fall in love with him...? lol I'm brainstormin myself xD
Also, is Minho older than Jonghyun here? O.o
Anyways, I loved this, please consider writing a sequel *or even starting a chaptered fic with this*!
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I actually have an account for my fluffy/happy OTPs fics and one for more like...angsty and/or NC-17 not-necessarily-OTP fics. I'm really sorry!!
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I'm glad you noticed the 'yet'! This tiny little word is the only one that makes me consider writing a sequel! XD
Well, in my head, all the Kibum's story and emotions are clear but I didn't write them on purpose. I wanted to keep material to write a sequel if I felt like it. If I don't write anything else...then it's left for you to imagine whatever you like! XD
Hmm, why would Minho be older than Jonghyun?! Did I write anything wrong?! @.@
I doubt I'll start a chaptered fic with this (I always take forever to update...) but I might write a sequel!
I hope you'll read it if I do!
Thank your very much for reading and leaving a comment! ♥
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I could tell you were not spilling the beans on Key's feelings on purpose, and I admire you for this because I am someone who can't write a fic without completely unveiling the characters' emotions, however freak they might be *which's not Kibum's case here, I'm just telling lol*. I hope me noticing your little bridge to a sequel will help make up your mind! haha xD
And hm, it may be me being terribly slow *don't blame me though, it's near 2am here*, but I thought Minho was older than Jonghyun from this:
He nuzzled the Minho's neck, searching for comfort or whatever he needed to feel.
"You're tired," The older simply said. "Get some rest," (isn't it Minho saying this?)
"I'm sorry," Jonghyun sobbed and Minho couldn't quite catch what he said.
I'll be very happy with a sequel. I'll be even more happy if JongKey somehow make it into being together in the end! But nevermind my bias. xD♥
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I'll see if I can write that sequel~ Please look forward to it if it comes out someday!
You're right O.O I did write the older I'll go correct that right now! Thank you so much for pointing it out!!!
XD I'll see what I can do for the Jongkey ending!
Thank you again ♥
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