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Without You

Oct 03, 2012 21:50

Title: Without You

Author: maeve_issyra

Fandom(s): Fifty Shades of Grey / Twilight

Rating: R

Word Count: 1,304

Inspiration: Fifty Shades of Grey, Chapter 13

Warnings: Mentions of Abuse, Character Death, Rape and Violence. Swearing, Alternate Universe

Summary: Ana finally makes a decision.

( (But you have to) )

book: fifty shades of grey, warning: rape, spitefic type: how it should have gone, warning: character death, book: twilight series general, warning: abuse, length: 1000-5000, character: anastasia steele, genre: horror/suspense, rating: r, character: charlie swan, warning: violence

Comments 15

accela101 October 3 2012, 20:09:34 UTC

In tears. Legitimately tearing up right now. Well done.

maeve_issyra October 3 2012, 20:18:29 UTC

Thank you so much!! :)

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maeve_issyra October 3 2012, 20:29:56 UTC

Thank you!! I love Ana/Kate, too. They were obviously meant to be. And yes, I do see Edward and Bella as human in this 'verse, and Bella is definitely dead.

gehayi October 3 2012, 22:29:51 UTC

Now this is the way that Fifty Shades SHOULD end. Hooray for Charlie Swan as a sympathetic detective! And hooray for Ana/Kate!

maeve_issyra October 4 2012, 18:02:29 UTC

It's all because of you, Gehayi! Your and Ket's awesome sporking brought this along. And Stacy, of course :)

xxburningsoulxx October 3 2012, 23:54:15 UTC

YAY!!!!!!

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maeve_issyra October 4 2012, 17:56:06 UTC

Yay indeed! Thanks for reading!

erikalyndis October 4 2012, 00:16:27 UTC

Gaston gets arrested and there's Ana/Kate? This story is spoiling its readers, it really it.

maeve_issyra October 4 2012, 17:55:48 UTC

Well, I think everyone in this community has suffered through enough badfic to be spoilt a little... Thanks for reading :)