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Without You

Oct 03, 2012 21:50

Title: Without You

Author: maeve_issyra

Fandom(s): Fifty Shades of Grey / Twilight

Rating: R

Word Count: 1,304

Inspiration: Fifty Shades of Grey, Chapter 13

Warnings: Mentions of Abuse, Character Death, Rape and Violence. Swearing, Alternate Universe

Summary: Ana finally makes a decision.

( (But you have to) )

book: fifty shades of grey, warning: rape, spitefic type: how it should have gone, warning: character death, book: twilight series general, warning: abuse, length: 1000-5000, character: anastasia steele, genre: horror/suspense, rating: r, character: charlie swan, warning: violence

Comments 15

mibamonster October 4 2012, 08:25:42 UTC

Wow, That was really intense. It's great how you combined Twilight and Fifty Shades like this, taking the best out of every character. And Ana's comments between brackets are so haunting... This was so good. So, SO good.

maeve_issyra October 4 2012, 18:03:28 UTC

Thank you! I figured that since Fifty Shades is Twilight fanfic anyway, I might as well try combining the characters. And clearly, that worked.

sinestris October 6 2012, 07:33:16 UTC

Oh Charlie... Poor poor Charlie... *hugs him SO HARD*

Poor Ana too... Legitimately feeling so sorry for all the characters here...

maeve_issyra October 6 2012, 09:33:54 UTC

That was the idea... Thanks for reading! :)

magykal January 11 2013, 05:13:23 UTC

Oh my gosh this was amazing!

Ana/Kate love and poor, poor, Charlie! *hugs him really hard*

Thank you <3

maeve_issyra January 11 2013, 18:48:18 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! Really glad you like it :)