Beautiful Insanity - Chapter Four

[tsubasa_quill]

Title: Beautiful Insanity
Ratings: T/16+
Characters based upon: Inoo Kei, Arioka Daiki, Okamoto Keito, Yamada Ryosuke
Inspired by : The Video Game "Alice Madness Returns" and a school test (weird?? it's a long story)
Setting : A small English Village (fictional), London, Umbria Home(fictional)
Time Line : The year is 2014
Genre: AU! Horror, mystery,

Comments

[mayumi_san]

I've been checking your page twice everyday because I was really really excited about their meeting~~

I'm intrigued about Dai-chan's dream! Did he have bad relationships with his family, most especially his father?

And there were a lot of mentions of roses, ne... An black roses actually symbolize death, in a way, right? Umbria Home is a really ominous place~

I hope the students meet Ruka soon! Looking forward to it!

[tsubasa_quill]

Hi!!

I'm so sorry for the delay...but don't worry i will be posting up the meeting chapter before i sleep today :)

I like how you caught on with the roses :) Apparently it symbolizes quite a few things...but yes death is one of them...

they will thanks so much for your patience :)

[mayumi_san]

The reason I check Beautiful Insanity so often is that I am IN LOVE with, well, everything.

I first got confused with the usage of different names, but then I got used to it because there was a pattern in your naming, anyway. That was quite new, and it is very delightful. I feel like I'm reading a novel, and imagining characters come to life straight from the pages of the book. This really does not have the fanfiction feel.

Second fact is well, your story flow is very very smooth-- I have no more to add to that praise!
Thirdly, plot is so amazing there are hardly words for it. I am in love with Umbria Home (seriously, I feel the Resident Evil thing for some weird reason) And with the title and just the whole setting and timeline in general. <3

AND! ANDDDD! you are incorporating many minuscule details here and there that actually forms a bigger part of the story--- HANDS DOWN I AM YOUR FAN FOREVER.

Writing this because you deserve many praises. :))

Looking forward to the next update!

[tsubasa_quill]

Oh dear *blushes furiously*

I feel like I'm reading a novel, and imagining characters come to life straight from the pages of the book. This really does not have the fanfiction feel.

OMG this...you have no idea how much this means to me ToT

oh Resident Evil it is...I keep imagining a horror genre video game when writing about that place :P

Even though they are many institutions that look like proper hospitals...but this is just an idea gone wrong so...

Thank you so so much!!!

*squishes u*

I will do my best for the next chapter!!!
<3<3<3

[princessxnicola]

I love the mood~
things're revealing >w

[tsubasa_quill]

glad you do...they are and more will soon!!

Thank for reading!!

[sugarwhales]

You know the drill! Wait for me? ♥
tho if you wanna upload the next chapter it's fine.. You'll just get 2 long comments in a row. :D

[tsubasa_quill]

you will always have a place here ~ *hearts*

[sugarwhales]

DAISUKE KATO.
THIS SMEXY CUNNING MAN RIGHT HERE IS MY HERO. ♥ FROM HERE ONWARDS I AM CLAIMING DAISUKE KATO. IDC WHAT ANYONE SAYS. HE IS TOO AWESOME FOR HIS OWN GOOD.

This may only be the fourth chapter and he might turn evil or something halfway through and kills everyone because of some mad cow disease BUT HE WILL STILL BE MY HERO ヾ(●´∀｀●) BECAUSE HE IS DAISUKE KATO.

maybe I might take Ruka too. who knows.. (grin)

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WHO DARES TO HURT DAI-CHAN? Give me his name and address and I'm going to kill him. Blood, Tsu-chan. Lots of it.

But on the other hand, that was one nice way to start the chapter. I'm so curious to know who this jerk person is! "..dumped you here with me!" Hm. Uncle? Brother? Grandfather? Uncle? It's always the uncle. Uncles are always evil in horror or suspense stories. Unless .. it's a female! Ugh just tell me already! I can't stand the suspense! (´Д` ;)

Wait hold on WHOA. This a$$hole person whipped Dai-chan with a belt?!

That's it, mystery guy. You, me, outside at eight. Bring your sorry self.

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[sugarwhales]

(ohmg you know I exceeded the word limit for this? It was 5212 characters. that's why it's split into half.)

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Dai-chan is so serious. That isn't good. Something's wrong; either the nightmare still haunts him or the history of the place + what he has found out is no laughing matter. Or both. I bet it's both. I mean, you do not treat people that way when they ask you for chocolate milk. (With the exception of me, of course. I don't share my chocolate. At all. Not even in dairy form. I love it too much.)

"Age has nothing to do with a man’s choice of beverage." Someone get this guy a Nobel Peace Prize award now.

Ken is so adorable, ahhhhh Ken~ He just knows when to stop things from escalating too far. /claps

".. Kei reaches out to poke the yellow rose standing in a simple vase .." Coincidentally I just finished a report on roses and their significance for English class two days ago, and I know you did not write this for nothing. I mean firstly, if you didn't want it to hint at something, then you wouldn't have mentioned him doing

[9reen4pple]

yaay! chapter 4!!

“Well you’re a scary wax figure devoid of human feelings!”
that creeps me out because it reminds me of this oneshot i read about Yabu killing Kei and keeping him forever as a statue (O.o)

but anyhoo, i guess it's not just our Ruka who's had a rough past...it makes me wonder about Kei and Ken too...secrets, secrets, secrets...lol XD

and why is the place call Umbria? i look up the word and all i got is a town in Italy...and is it built upon some creepy holy land or something? i'm imagining that the knights form some sort of cult and practiced black magic on it, hence the black roses!

i'm going overboard with all the guessing and questioning, aren't i? XD

[tsubasa_quill]

eh....that is superrrrrrrrr creepy!!! 0_0

I LOVE SECRETS *whacked*

lol...

i just found the name somber and mysterious...I wasn't really knowledgeable of the fact that it was a real place until people started mentioning it XD

and it kinda fits...in a strange way XD

wooh...an interesting coincidence isn't it???

[riinchaan]

... died... o_____o... Kinda scared ...'

Ehh, Did Dai-chan not get along with his family?

[tsubasa_quill]

daijobu???

sorry :(

well...can't elaborate too much here but yes...his inner turmoil is kinda family related ...

thanx for reading!!