Beautiful Insanity - Chapter Four

[tsubasa_quill]

Title: Beautiful Insanity
Ratings: T/16+
Characters based upon: Inoo Kei, Arioka Daiki, Okamoto Keito, Yamada Ryosuke
Inspired by : The Video Game "Alice Madness Returns" and a school test (weird?? it's a long story)
Setting : A small English Village (fictional), London, Umbria Home(fictional)
Time Line : The year is 2014
Genre: AU! Horror, mystery,

Comments

[sugarwhales]

You know the drill! Wait for me? ♥
tho if you wanna upload the next chapter it's fine.. You'll just get 2 long comments in a row. :D

[tsubasa_quill]

you will always have a place here ~ *hearts*

[sugarwhales]

DAISUKE KATO.
THIS SMEXY CUNNING MAN RIGHT HERE IS MY HERO. ♥ FROM HERE ONWARDS I AM CLAIMING DAISUKE KATO. IDC WHAT ANYONE SAYS. HE IS TOO AWESOME FOR HIS OWN GOOD.

This may only be the fourth chapter and he might turn evil or something halfway through and kills everyone because of some mad cow disease BUT HE WILL STILL BE MY HERO ヾ(●´∀｀●) BECAUSE HE IS DAISUKE KATO.

maybe I might take Ruka too. who knows.. (grin)

--

WHO DARES TO HURT DAI-CHAN? Give me his name and address and I'm going to kill him. Blood, Tsu-chan. Lots of it.

But on the other hand, that was one nice way to start the chapter. I'm so curious to know who this jerk person is! "..dumped you here with me!" Hm. Uncle? Brother? Grandfather? Uncle? It's always the uncle. Uncles are always evil in horror or suspense stories. Unless .. it's a female! Ugh just tell me already! I can't stand the suspense! (´Д` ;)

Wait hold on WHOA. This a$$hole person whipped Dai-chan with a belt?!

That's it, mystery guy. You, me, outside at eight. Bring your sorry self.

-- (cont)

[sugarwhales]

(ohmg you know I exceeded the word limit for this? It was 5212 characters. that's why it's split into half.)

--

Dai-chan is so serious. That isn't good. Something's wrong; either the nightmare still haunts him or the history of the place + what he has found out is no laughing matter. Or both. I bet it's both. I mean, you do not treat people that way when they ask you for chocolate milk. (With the exception of me, of course. I don't share my chocolate. At all. Not even in dairy form. I love it too much.)

"Age has nothing to do with a man’s choice of beverage." Someone get this guy a Nobel Peace Prize award now.

Ken is so adorable, ahhhhh Ken~ He just knows when to stop things from escalating too far. /claps

".. Kei reaches out to poke the yellow rose standing in a simple vase .." Coincidentally I just finished a report on roses and their significance for English class two days ago, and I know you did not write this for nothing. I mean firstly, if you didn't want it to hint at something, then you wouldn't have mentioned him doing

[tsubasa_quill]

Yes...the yellow rose was me playing around but if you know what it symbolizes then that is the reason it was in the center of their table :P

Oh It wasn't ruka that beat the guy to death..it was just to show that people at the home were becoming careless...

ken's a humble know-it-all type XD

i love how you don't let a single detail pass you... :D

I hope the rest of the story doesn't dissapoint...i will do my best though!

^^

yay!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for the cookies!!!

<3<3<3

[tsubasa_quill]

LOL....

I <3 this!

that person...um...i have this urge to tell you who it is since u r so close...but i have to restrain myself...

don't wanna spoil the next chapters for u :P

[tsubasa_quill]

your uber long comment is <3 lol...so no worries :P