Come Fly With Me (part 5)

[troublesize]

A/N: Holy moley, readers, I can't believe you put up with me! I didn't realise there'd been such a big gap between posts on this story. Agh, I'm sorry! Part 6 will be the final instalment in this fic, I hope to get that up within the next week or so :)

This chapter is partly inspired by the fanart by mortmere (also a deviantart user), chiefly their piece

Comments

[tiny_teaspoon]

that is hot , floaty hot *gg*
From now on I have those pictures in my mind, when I see the sea Ö.o

thank you for writing this!

[troublesize]

Lol, floaty hot, I like it XD

Thanks for your comment, I'm very glad to have infected your mind in a good way ;)

[darthhellokitty]

Why, why, why am I in chilly Seattle, in bed with a cough, and not on a lovely island like this? But it's nice to at least read about it, and our two lovely vacationers

[troublesize]

Wow, thank you so much for your lovely response! I can completely relate to your situation of being ill - just when I got better from a cold, I seem to have come down with flu! *angsts terribly

[darthhellokitty]

Oh, don't worry, I grew up in Florida, temps in the 30s and 40s were common in the summer! And the spring! I don't have the heat tolerance I did then, though...

I should HOPE spending time on this isn't a waste! This is so much fun for the rest of us!

Heh, I saved both those pictures to my compie when they were first posted, I like them so much!

[troublesize]

Dang weather. It's never the temperature you want it to be, when you want it to be :P

Time spent on fics doesn't seem to be a waste, it seems to be heaps of fun!!!
....And then I bite my nails like crazy as I post, hoping that other people will enjoy my writing - yay for quick commenters like you! :D

They're great pics! I asked Mortmere for permission to link them to this chapter aaaages ago, before I'd gotten anywhere near writing it, because the plot started developing itself around them, so heaps of credit and praise to her!!

[ourdramaqueen]

Hmmm, what a lovely bedtime read... Now here's hoping John's little case will keep Sherlock from getting bored!

[troublesize]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :D

We can only ever hope that Sherlock doesn't get bored - it's complete anarchy when he does!!! :O

[kirakira_nanoda]

I read thongs and I was like... you're from Australia, aren't you? XD Hello fellow Aussie! haha. They're called flip-flops in American and the UK to the best of my knowledge, but hey, I'm pretty sure you could leave it as it is. even if only to confuse everyone who isn't Aussie :P

John surrenders to physics... and Sherlock's touch I dare say! :P

Can't wait for the next chapter!

[troublesize]

Haha, damn, my cover is blown! Yes, not-so-secret Aussie here! *waves* :D

This is where I also prove my Australianness: I'll leave 'thongs' as is until anyone has a super Brit-picking hissy fit/tells me definitively it isn't right. (/lazy) :P

Lol, for an Army guy, John seems to do a lot of surrendering ;) Less so in the next chapter, I can tell you! Next chapter is hopefully soon to come, I was inspired last night in a bout of insomnia. Hurrah for sleeplessness.

Re: ROFL!

[troublesize]

Ahahaha - I thought that was probably how it would be misread, but wasn't completely sure! Good to know, though. Very VERY tempting to leave it as is, to torment UK peoples :P

Dayum...I seem to be losing out on the financial front, first I have to pay someone's shower bill, now I have to buy you a new keyboard?? *sadface* But I's a poor, struggling artiste! :P

So glad you enjoyed the fic! :D

Re: ROFL!

[troublesize]

Oh. Oh, dear. Perhaps not the *ergonomic* ones, LOL!

Just thought I'd share this link for inspiration of "Sherlock" in a bathing costume... (just ignore the overwhelming Benedictness of the video :P)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pUmsNeiFpyQ&playnext=1&list=PL294B36E45A2A1EF8&index=44