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triskellion

NCIS: What Makes An Alpha?

Nov 11, 2008 09:37

I know everyone is waiting for the meeting with Abby's contact, but I'm still working with that one. Hopefully, this little nugget will be considered an acceptable treat.

Title: What Makes An Alpha?
Series: Home
Author: triskellionRating: PG ( Read more... )

home, writing, fanfiction, ncis

Comments 51

wscaster November 12 2008, 03:10:55 UTC

Another great story :oD

But I have to say that I love the way that you capture the characters, keep them real to cannon and add the little twists that seem so natural. The best of all worlds!

triskellion November 12 2008, 05:17:23 UTC

*grin* That is exactly what I'm aiming for. Thank you!

jmchau November 12 2008, 03:21:30 UTC

I am enjoying this series

triskellion November 12 2008, 05:17:46 UTC

*grin* Thank you.

anonymous November 12 2008, 03:25:24 UTC

I really, really loved this and I so can't wait for more. Loved how Tony stood up to Gibbs and how Gibbs accepted the critism, it takes a very strong leader to listen to and acknowledge their faults!

ShadowCat17

triskellion November 12 2008, 05:19:27 UTC

More is coming, though not tomorrow. I'm afraid I'm still writing it.

I think that ability to take criticism, if unwillingly, and the ability to give it is an important part of the dynamic between those two. That, and the head slaps.

I'm delighted that you like my interpretation.

kateri_e November 12 2008, 05:23:15 UTC

Very interesting take on the gibbs/Franks dynamic, of which had this fan at least scratching her head. Of course I'm waiting to see how you handle the whole Hollis Mann 'thang' since Gibbs seems to very much want Tony back. Hmm..... she was very Alpha, shifter maybe? Eager for more.

triskellion November 12 2008, 14:36:27 UTC

Always had me going 'huh?' too. So I finally came up with an excuse.

Mann may be alpha, which will cause problems, but as far as I'm concerned she's not shifter. That would create more problems than I want to deal with. As for what happens, you'll just have to see.

djaddict November 12 2008, 08:04:52 UTC

I am totally in love with you and want to have your babies!!!

Oops, wrong post. er, um..

Really loving this story more and more, this was an awesome chapter and I know that you will get them back together eventually so I am happy!

triskellion November 12 2008, 14:37:41 UTC

*Cackles* You'd have to want my husband's babies, and I don't share him, so that's out.

I'm glad you're enjoying the madness. Guss I'd better go write more so I have something to post one of these days.

djaddict November 12 2008, 16:57:21 UTC

Pretty please!!