Snow and Marshmallows [FanFic]

Feb 08, 2010 16:19

Title: Snow and Marshmallows
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Team, Jack
Rating: FRC
Prompt: Hotch/Jack/Team- snowball fight by underspell102
Summary: Hotch and Jack enjoy fun with snow and marshmallows with the rest of the team.
Notes: This is based on the prompt of "Hotch/Jack/Team- snowball fight" by underspell102. Slight Season 5 spoilers possible. Wanna prompt me? Go here!
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fabrisse February 8 2010, 21:37:04 UTC
“By the time he’s officially ready the snow’s gonna be melted, man, com’on,”
As I look outside my window in SW DC, that's the dumbest thing I've ever heard. *LOL*

I like how eager they all are. It sounds like Jack had a good time, too.

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took_skye February 8 2010, 21:45:38 UTC
Hahaha...well I wasn't basing this on the recent snowstorm just, um, a general one. ...Or you can take it that Morgan is, in fact, that impatient, hahaha! ;-)

Haha, yeah, they really wanted to cut loose, haha! He did indeed! :D

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mcgarrygirl78 February 8 2010, 21:50:26 UTC
This is sooooo adorable. I love Morgan getting tackled by Reid, who then turns and gets excited about marshmallows in his cocoa.

Jack is wonderful as always and Rossi and the snowball, the 2nd wife, and bumping the banister....good times.

I really enjoyed it : )

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took_skye February 8 2010, 21:58:35 UTC
Haha, thanks!! Yeah, had to have Reid tackle Morgan at least once...don't know why, I just did. And Reid'll always love himself some marshmallows, haha!

I really like writing Jack now...he's just so cute and lovable and always makes me smile. Haha, had to give good ol' Rossi some fun face-time. :D

Thank you, I'm glad you did! (It's the start of a new self-rule I have...if I write an angsty piece I must write a fluffy one right after to balance it, haha!)

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mcgarrygirl78 February 8 2010, 22:01:17 UTC
That's a good rule to have : )

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daylyn February 8 2010, 22:28:28 UTC
Too cute! And I loved, loved, LOVED that Reid tackled Morgan. Loved it. Jack is adorable and Hotch is just wonderful and this was absolutely sweet and I am feeling all warm and fuzzy inside. Thank you.

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took_skye February 8 2010, 22:42:09 UTC
Hahaha, had to have Reid tackle Morgan at least once, right? And the idea of Reid knocking Morgan down into a snowbank is damn near priceless, hahaha!! :D I love Jack, always, he's the sweetest and Hotch's such a good daddy! :D

I'm really glad you liked the story and am happy it made you all warm and fuzzy! Thanks for the comment! :D

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smacky30 February 9 2010, 00:39:14 UTC
This was just adorable. I so want snow where I live - and those people to come and play with me. :D

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took_skye February 9 2010, 00:49:31 UTC
Haha, thanks so much! Ah, yeah, snow can be fun...but usually only the first day it occurs or so, haha! But, if the BAU were to join me in the snow maybe I could enjoy it way more, haha! ;-)

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mitfordgal February 9 2010, 01:37:24 UTC
Loved it! I crave the picture in my head of the team just hangin' out.

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took_skye February 9 2010, 01:42:04 UTC
I'm glad you did! :D Wouldn't it be great if they all hung out and had snowball fights on the show sometime?? :D

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