Snow and Marshmallows [FanFic]

Feb 08, 2010 16:19

Title: Snow and Marshmallows
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Team, Jack
Rating: FRC
Prompt: Hotch/Jack/Team- snowball fight by underspell102
Summary: Hotch and Jack enjoy fun with snow and marshmallows with the rest of the team.
Notes: This is based on the prompt of "Hotch/Jack/Team- snowball fight" by underspell102. Slight Season 5 spoilers possible. Wanna prompt me? Go here!
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Comments 27

tearbos February 9 2010, 03:38:26 UTC
“I got tackled by a guy who still likes marshmallows in his hot cocoa!”

Loved that! Love the Hotch & Jack too!

Great stuff.

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took_skye February 9 2010, 13:26:00 UTC
Haha, I'm glad you found it amusing...it is a surprising thought, to have Reid tackle Morgan, but a funny one I feel, haha!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the comment! :D

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underspell102 February 9 2010, 04:06:50 UTC
I LOVE this! My favorite part?
“I can show you where the others are,” the boy’s grin turned a little mischievous, “I know where Morgan went too.”

“See, this is one of the things I miss in not having children,” Rossi spoke up with a smile, “the loyalty of a son to his father. There’s nothing that compares to it.”

hehe this made my day. :-)

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took_skye February 9 2010, 13:30:13 UTC
I'm so glad you did, thank you so much for the prompt, it was wonderful! :D

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citymusings February 9 2010, 08:52:00 UTC
That was so much fun! I love Jack's lil loyalty to his dad! The Morgan and Reid bit was great too.

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took_skye February 9 2010, 13:32:05 UTC
Haha, thanks, I actually had a lot of fun writing this one too which is always good, haha! Jack loves his daddy...and Morgan and Reid are just funny together in general to me, haha! :D

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zamboni12 February 9 2010, 10:44:29 UTC
Such a lovely story. I really love it. Morgan got tackled by Reid is priceless and little Jach is pure cuteness.
He moved his hip to bump the banister causing its contents to fall off and, mostly, onto Emily who immediately gave a yelp and jumped up out of her hiding space. “Hello Emily.” Playful Rossi! Yeah!

Thanks for sharing this cute story!

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took_skye February 9 2010, 13:35:32 UTC
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Figured Reid had to tackle Morgan once and this was the perfect time to do it, haha! Haha, I knew I was going to have fun with Rossi in this piece the moment he appeared to me sitting in a snow-covered deck chair wearing snowpants and drinking liquor from a thermos, hahaha! :D

Thank you for commenting! :D

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snow madsci_hpfic February 9 2010, 18:43:39 UTC
If it were at all based on "Snowmagedden", Morgan is just that impatient, or too used to Chicago snow getting nasty really quickly. I too wish to comment on how great the Reid-tackle->marshmallows bit was. XD

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Re: snow took_skye February 9 2010, 19:33:24 UTC
Haha...it can be whichever you like. :D I'm really glad you liked it and, haha, yeah that part gave me the giggles to write so I'm glad it's a hit with the readers! :D

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