prison!au, chapter fiiiiiive.

Oct 07, 2007 14:25

Finished writing 7 and omfg the chapter lengths are insane and beyond my control and I'm pretty sure this will be at least 11 chapters long, which sucks because I wanted a neat number of chapters, like 10. Suck.

first chapter // second chapter // third chapter // fourth chapter

jailbird songs, chapter 5 ( Read more... )

pairing: kibum/donghae, pairing: siwon/hankyung, pairing: eunhyuk/junsu, fandom: super junior, character: sungmin, character: kyuhyun, character: eeteuk, - prison!au, pairing: kangin/eeteuk, pairing: shindong/boa, character: eunhyuk, character: kangin, character: shindong, character: heechul, character: donghae, character: hankyung, character: kibum, character: siwon

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virginangelic October 7 2007, 13:38:17 UTC
This was a lovely update! <3 I don't even know where to begin gushing about. Great job, as usual...

I just think it's a pity that there's no more references to FT Island (I was referring to Hongki to be more specific. Kangteuk baby! XD )

Can't wait for the next update because of the kihae!!!

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tongzhiai October 7 2007, 14:48:19 UTC
I was referring to Hongki to be more specific. Kangteuk baby!
Well, never say never.. ;)

Thank you!

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comicbookending October 7 2007, 13:54:22 UTC
Thanks for squishing the 'references coming back' idea early XD; I would've gotten too excited over FTI if you hadn't, haha.

This chapter is great as usual. Sometimes an 'in-between'/transition chapter is necessary in between all the action, and this one is good because it's not just full of random crap that detracts from the story, which is what happens sometimes. The KyuMin is adorable, and so was the YeWook, in passing. The Heechul/Hyukjae banter was funny. Hyuk is in such denial. I think. It'd be odd if it turns out he was actually sincere in all his, "No, we're straight~", but.. this is crazy enough that I won't rule it out yet, lawls. Yoochun and his "bling bling ball" made LOL. I can just imagine that session, YooBum speaking English and all *__*~ Ahaha.

The ShinBoA is sweet.

Looking forward to the next update~ :D<3

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tongzhiai October 7 2007, 15:23:36 UTC
Yeah, I'd write but I refuse to get into anything just to write it and anyway, I think this fic can do fine without another kpop band popping up. Shinhwa will guest but that's it.

Hyuk is straight. In his own mind. He's speshul like that but um. Well, we'll see..

Yoochun!English is probably all my imagination but I do love it. Bling bling ball is a lyric from Show Me Your Love.

Thank you! :D

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taylormercury October 7 2007, 15:29:59 UTC
Yes!! More of this crazy prison!au. I'm being terrible at commenting on every part, but I've been reading them all! Filler or not, this still good, and still an enjoyable read.

The Chungrish reference KILLED me. bling bling balls XD

I love the humour you lace through this. And all of them.

Poor Hae though, so sad~ I'm definitely, definitely looking forward to seeing how the KiHae will develop! :D

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tongzhiai October 7 2007, 15:53:48 UTC
It's not too much of a filler, but it feels like it because the next chapter is humongous and has like, everyone. :D

Chungrish, d'aw. Thank you!

Hae'll be just fine. Eventually.

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tongzhiai October 7 2007, 17:41:04 UTC
Your Sihan icon rocks!

Thankyouuu.

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tongzhiai October 7 2007, 17:41:55 UTC
YehWook is like all of world's schmoop put together in here. I love it.

Thanks, glad you liked. And I don't remember the number of members in FTI, either. Five, maybe?

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