fic: my waistcoat, my rules

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title: My Waistcoat, My Rules
characters: Jack/Ianto
words: 2698
rating: PG
note: this is a late birthday gift for you, Paula pamoreno :3 Post-'From Out Of The Rain'; spoilers for that episode. Ianto feels guilty about the deaths of the victims of the Night Travellers. Jack comforts him. Contains a bucketload of banter.

Comments

[skyballetdancer]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! :D

[itoshii_chan]

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! So CUTE!!

I just adore the banter between Jack and Ianto; ALWAYS entertaining! ^______^

Thank you for the WONDERFUL fic!! ^_______________________^

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You're very welcome! Thanks for the comment :]

[itoshii_chan]

My pleasure! ^__________________________________^

The quote that Jack repeats from KKBB had me ROFL! And then the banter between them from Sleeper and then a repeat again for KKBB, but this time, you adopted the banter between Jack and John with the, "You were the Wife!" - "No, you were!"

*clutches stomach and ROFLMAO*

"Playgroundy feel" and "exotic, teenage romances and stealing kisses on swings" indeed! *grins widely*

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:D I'm glad you picked up on the reused dialogue! The KKBB banter mirroring Jack and John in particular. I might write some John!fic soon because I've had urges and he says amusing things.

[3500doch]

Cute, hilarious, perfectly fitting with the episode, lovely characterisation.

Perfection.

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:) Thanks for such a nice comment!

[saturniia]

"Get in before I drive through you."

Oh, like that would stop Jack for more than half an hour. ;)

That said, it would be a waste to use all that retcon on a park full of pre-adults. Best that Jack just got in. :D

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Your comment about retcon made me giggle :D Thank you!

[corazone]

That was lovely - made me smile today

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:) Thank you!