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fic: my waistcoat, my rules

May 02, 2008 23:30

title: My Waistcoat, My Rules
characters: Jack/Ianto
words: 2698
rating: PG
note: this is a late birthday gift for you, Paula pamoreno :3 Post-'From Out Of The Rain'; spoilers for that episode. Ianto feels guilty about the deaths of the victims of the Night Travellers. Jack comforts him. Contains a bucketload of banter.

( Fool Ianto once, shame on Jack; fool Ianto twice, shame on Ianto; fool Ianto three times, be prepared to be served instant coffee for a week. )

janto, torchwood, fanfic

Comments 103

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timetraveled May 3 2008, 18:38:22 UTC

The characterisation was spot on. like this ' . '

LOL! Thanks a bunch! Your comment made me giggle.

joonscribble May 2 2008, 23:14:39 UTC

Aww! And can I just say? AWWWW!!!

You balanced the humor and angst so well it brought a warm feeling to my stomach. Perfect!

timetraveled May 3 2008, 18:41:08 UTC

:D Thanks a bunch!

gypsyjr May 2 2008, 23:14:45 UTC

Oh, the banter. I love these two.

timetraveled May 3 2008, 18:42:42 UTC

Me too (obviously) :D Thanks for reading!

purpig21 May 2 2008, 23:34:14 UTC

Oh this is simply adorable! This is them at their best. You did a fab job with the tone and banter.

timetraveled May 3 2008, 18:43:06 UTC

:) Thanks a bunch!

kendarath May 2 2008, 23:43:19 UTC

That was adorable. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Though I have to say that I enjoyed the last little interaction with the car the best, I think. :D Very nicely done.

timetraveled May 3 2008, 18:44:53 UTC

Haha, I love that SUV. Thanks for the comment!