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Understanding [11/?]

Feb 10, 2008 21:57

Title: Understanding [11/?] - The Plan
Rating: NC-17 overall

Pairing/Characters: Mohinder/Sylar, Ensemble

Spoilers: Seasons 1 & 2, and some of the online comics.
Warnings: Some possibly, vaguely disturbing imagery surrounding being buried alive. A little language, vague references to past m/m sex and murderous intentions. Nothing major.

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pairing: mohinder/sylar, fandom: heroes, story: understanding, character: sylar, character: mohinder suresh

Comments 26

levitatethis February 11 2008, 17:56:12 UTC

Love it ( ... )

neshel February 12 2008, 17:56:15 UTC

You mentioned at the start being intimidated about writing Bennet and that much dialogue and I have to tell you you've done an excellent job.
^_^ Thank you!!

I like the explanation you have Mohinder give for why he's seemed to go back and forth on working with The Company. His reasons make so much sense...and he's right, what he's done for Molly Bennet would totally do for Claire.
mmmm, it just seemed the natural explanation for me. Glad it makes sense to you too.

Sylar on the plane is amusing...as much as he's focused on his revenge list he, as usual, can get distracted by thoughts of Mohinder.
Mohinder pwns all other thoughts. ^_^

Oh my...and Adam at the end! Your cliffhangers kill me! I'm way too anxious for the next part now.
*rubs hands together evilly*

coldryuuza February 12 2008, 00:43:51 UTC

eiii... I hope Adam escapes with his skin intact. I like him for some reason. I seem to have taken a liking to disturbed individuals *points at Sylar*

and awww at Sylar falling asleep with the memory of Mohinder, lol.

omg, the tension b/w Bennet and Mohinder was awesome!! I could literally feel it. u did amazing job with Bennet.

lol at the thought of Sylar getting lost over the ocean. I'm sure Nathan could do it with no problem ;D

(oh noes!! HIRO!)

neshel February 19 2008, 17:43:24 UTC

I seem to have taken a liking to disturbed individuals
*giggles* mmmm, you and me both. I adore Sylar, and Adam continues to grow on me.

omg, the tension b/w Bennet and Mohinder was awesome!! I could literally feel it. u did amazing job with Bennet.
Awesome! =) Thank you.

lol at the thought of Sylar getting lost over the ocean. I'm sure Nathan could do it with no problem ;D
pfft, naw. Between the two, Sylar would be most likely to survive a flight over the Pacific, I think. Either way though, it seems kinda reckless. Though I suppose it depends on just how fast they can fly.

coldryuuza February 20 2008, 01:30:39 UTC

I have to defend Nathan, you leave me no choice *grin*

Nathan is the only one, aside from Sylar, who intuitively understands his powers, without having the help of the Company. I mean sure, Sylar understands how the power of flight works, but the experience Nathan has beats that. ^__^; but I'm pretty sure, eventually, Sylar would win, because, duh, he was like a billion powers and Nathan's is a passive power.

plus Nathan can go SONIC BOOM in the sky *giggle* so the Pacific ocean is no biggie.

neshel February 20 2008, 01:55:23 UTC

mmmm, well West didn't get any help either and he didn't seem to have any problems. I think flying is one of the easier powers to get a handle on... not that I'm criticizing Nathan, I love the dude. ^_^

Also, just as an aside, I did a surprising amount of research into flight speeds for this because I had to work out how long it would take Sylar to travel the whole way there and such. Its a 12 hour flight from California to Japan, and even at supersonic speeds its still going to be a bloody long trip over endless blue. Unless you have a built-in compass, or its night and you know how to navigate by the stars, there's gonna be a high risk of getting lost. Plus, damn cold.

... yes... I spent way too much time working out the details.

ivy_b February 12 2008, 08:41:45 UTC

I'm glad Bennet is joining in the fun. Look out Hiro! I hope you don't end up killing him, I kinda like the guy.

neshel February 19 2008, 17:44:02 UTC

=) Thanks for the comment.

ladywilde80 February 13 2008, 01:54:20 UTC

How in the hell do I forget to leave you the glowing praise that both you and your amazing fic deserve?

Seriously.
I think you did a brilliant job with this chapter and I apologize again for pulling out my bull whip on the Sylar scene. It was only a tiny sting, right? XD

I think the way you rewrote that worked perfectly and lets not forget the opening scene, which is just brimming over with amazing tension. You shouldn't have stressed Bennett so much. You did an awesome job nailing his character and he came across really well.

Anyway. You = Awesome, now send me a smutty Mylar email, would ya? Mohinder is getting awful lonely out in that back alley ^_^

neshel February 13 2008, 02:09:03 UTC

*salutes*

Yes ma'am!

*puts on Sylar-smut hat*

aunt_zelda February 16 2008, 22:33:55 UTC

I'm sorry I'm so insanely behind on slash ... *headesk ( ... )

neshel February 19 2008, 17:47:10 UTC

I'm sorry I'm so insanely behind on slash ... *headesk*
mmmm, sometimes life just gets in the way eh?

*LOLs at your comments*

But Claude is still alive … *it’s been so long since I read this, it’s hard to keep stories straight!*
Yes, Claude is still alive. Candice, however, is not.

No no no no NO! Hiro has enough trouble with Adam and his 10th Wifey!
Unfortunately, Hiro has pissed off some serious badduns...

aunt_zelda February 19 2008, 19:28:09 UTC

mmmm, sometimes life just gets in the way eh?
yeppers!

*LOLs at your comments*
Hee, I love being funny ...

Yes, Claude is still alive. Candice, however, is not.
Woohoo!

Unfortunately, Hiro has pissed off some serious badduns...
*sighs* Hopefully his ginormous fanbase will protect him ...