Understanding [11/?]

[neshel]

Title: Understanding [11/?] - The Plan
Rating: NC-17 overall

Pairing/Characters: Mohinder/Sylar, Ensemble

Spoilers: Seasons 1 & 2, and some of the online comics.
Warnings: Some possibly, vaguely disturbing imagery surrounding being buried alive. A little language, vague references to past m/m sex and murderous intentions. Nothing major.

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Comments

[neshel]

Thank you so much!!!!!

[centuries_old]

I love how very guilty you've written Mohinder in the first part. Guilty, guilty, guilty. It's hilarious, really, how much blame he's just put on himself. He'd be within his rights to say look, it's not my fault, Sylar's a crazy serial killer, I should just count my damn blessings that I got out alive. But no, instead he's obsessing over what happened. Which seems so very Mohinder, really, obsessing over something like this, analysing, letting it drive him mad. I really like how you've got such a handle on his character, it makes this entire fic 1000x more enjoyable. :D

I also can't help but hope that Sylar is his "wife". Or Hiro. That would be really awesome, lol. But it's probably the empath chick, sigh. Also, I really love how you've written this one sentence: If he was capable of anything other than existing he would be screaming. If his heart were functioning properly it would have been beating madly in his chest. If he had breath left to gasp and tears left to shed he would be sobbing. The parallelism in it combined with the

[neshel]

Haha, yes, Mohinder has a serious guilt complex. I'm really glad to hear that you enjoy my interpretation of Mohinder's character. ^_^

I also can't help but hope that Sylar is his "wife". Or Hiro.
O.o

The parallelism in it combined with the drama really gave it some impact.
Ooooh, thank you! That was one of my favourite lines. ^_^

Oh no, how will Mohinder manage to look like the Indian version of Indiana Jones if he hasn't got the bag!
oh dear, you're right! I'll have to find him a fedora! XD

What did this scene originally look like before your beta got to it?
er.... less Mohindy, more evil!Sylar plotting to kill Hiro. Though klepto!Sylar was still there.

Also, Bennet is pretty terrifying and intimidating. It's kinda part of his fun, but on the downside, kinda hard to write.
OMG YES! <.< >.> <.< ... he scares me!

I love how you've got his character being so snide about the previous night at Mohinder's place, even though he probably doesn't know what happened.
Not a clue!

This line? Bennet and Mohinder shared a long