Fic: Just Four Words

Dec 21, 2007 16:30

Just a little ficette from the depths of my exhausted brain.

Title: Just Four Words
Rating: G
Pairing: Jack/the real Captain Jack
Summary: A kind of missing scene from the episode Captain Jack Harkness. Jack knows the test of real power is knowing when not to use it.
Length: 200 words

With everything that is to come... )

torchwood

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silverrose December 21 2007, 18:18:45 UTC
Guh! I love Jack/Jack.

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smithy161 December 21 2007, 19:18:23 UTC
Mm, me too. I can watch that kiss over and over and...

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gauky_1976 December 21 2007, 23:23:57 UTC
I love them too and watch the kiss at least once a day...often more!!

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mad_jaks December 23 2007, 17:31:25 UTC
just popped in to give your icon love

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_medley_ December 21 2007, 18:23:57 UTC
Oh, that is fabulous and painful and very powerful. Also, I didn't even notice the second person until I read it the second time, and usually I find it jarring. But not when you do it.

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smithy161 December 21 2007, 19:21:31 UTC
Wow, that's an awesome compliment. And I'm glad, because I love second person!

Thank you!

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phoenix64 December 21 2007, 18:44:32 UTC
*sniff* Jack. Yes. I can see this going through his head. Absolutely.

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smithy161 December 21 2007, 19:22:22 UTC
Oh, yeah. I can practically sense it in the episode.

Thanks for reading!

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donutsweeper December 21 2007, 19:26:26 UTC
*sobs*

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smithy161 December 21 2007, 19:28:54 UTC
*Offers tissues?*

Thanks for reading!

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donutsweeper December 21 2007, 19:30:32 UTC
*grabs them* you don't have any donuts or a nice stiff drink too, do you?

There is just something SO sad and heart breaking about 1941 Jack and they way he and TW Jack acted towards each other

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smithy161 December 21 2007, 19:39:43 UTC
I have a box of mini-doughnuts! *Hands them over*

And yeah, agreed. That episode never fails to make my eyes damp. Maybe because Barrowman and that other guy are such wonderful actors, they just utterly nail the emotions in a way that's still subtle. And the idea of our!Jack, usually the mysterious guy who saves the day, having his own heroes makes me happy too.

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karaokegal December 21 2007, 22:43:01 UTC
WOW! You could launch a whole AU right there. I'm still concerned about what ramifications the whole dancing/kissing had in the death of CJH. I have serious doubts about that whole "surprised by Germans during training exercise" thing. Anyway this is beautiful and I could so imagine Jack thinking about it this way.

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smithy161 December 21 2007, 22:59:24 UTC
I have really no idea how anyone back then would actually have reacted to two men kissing so blatantly in public, but fuck. I hadn't thought about it like that. Ouch.

But yeah. Glad you liked this! Thank you for reading.

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donutsweeper December 21 2007, 23:31:49 UTC
Someone wrote up a whole dissertation after it aired that we were reading more into the dance/kiss than people would have at the time. They had footnotes and everything referencing data and books of the era

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smithy161 December 22 2007, 00:07:52 UTC
That's interesting. Any idea where it was posted? I'd love to know the actual facts from that time.

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