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Seize the Day - NaNoWriMo Attempt - Chapter 20

Dec 20, 2013 13:33

Well, apparently, I forgot I still had a few more chapters of this written that I hadn't posted -- and since I started working on this draft again, well... Time to spam, I guess. ;)
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1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14 | 15 | 16 | 17 | 18 | 19Savin frowned to himself as he and Jazz walked down the thin ( Read more... )

original fiction, the tomorrow trilogy, character: savin, novel: seize the day, pairing: jazz/savin, character: jazz, rating: pg-13

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alien_writings December 21 2013, 01:26:31 UTC

Oh Jazz, you are so clueless! I was amused by his spectacular lack of vegetable-shopping knowledge. That was kind of cute, but things certainly got less cute as the scene went on. Poor Jazz was so nervous. :/

No, Savin, the conversation you're going to have will not be pleasant!

Just how IS Jazz going to deal with the potential arranged marriage of doom?

theun4givables December 21 2013, 10:27:04 UTC

Jazz being nervous isn't a thing I get to write often. Jazz being clueless even less so, so I had fun writing this scene.

And nope, but he will at least handle it kinda well. I think.

Dunno yet. Or well, I have an idea, but no one thinks it's a good one (not even Jazz, lol).