Fanfiction: Taste Bud Issues
Title: Taste Bud Issues
Genre: Romance/Humour
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ontae and Jongkey (Mentions of 2min)
Summary: Taemin has severe relationship problems for a reason that could only be considered completely odd by his shrink, Kim Kibum.
A/N: About 5000 words.
( “It didn’t last with Sulli because she gave me cavities.” )
Genre: Romance/Humour
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ontae and Jongkey (Mentions of 2min)
Summary: Taemin has severe relationship problems for a reason that could only be considered completely odd by his shrink, Kim Kibum.
A/N: About 5000 words.
( “It didn’t last with Sulli because she gave me cavities.” )
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Yes ontae is adorable, forever and always. How can you not like tofu gurl. Something is defective with your Asian blood. :|
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LOL IRL
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i am going to come back and read this and leave a v. long comment
wheeze
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“-That you get cavities from your partners?! Are you kidding me?” to tell the truth i could imagine it being, like, the other way around b/c taemin is so sweet and adorable even as a uni student dawww
Of course, it was so obvious, sweet kisses. Why had he not thought of that brilliant notion? Maybe because the mere idea of sweet kisses inducing bacteria eating enamel in the oral cavity was somewhat, or really, totally insane. oh my god i love the tone of kibum's thoughts they are just so...so second-year-psych-student-like. and the fact that taemin is stupid cute enough to even say that in the first place oh god ♥
“Woah three whole times a day- Ooof!” exclaimed Jonghyun with amazement, soon rubbing his sore arm as Kibum smacked him, sending eye messages that he obviously was not helping the situation. doh the image, the image haha. poor jonghyun, in such an abusive relationship with kibum ( ... )
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And yes, it was a Hello Baby ref. /sobs I miss that show.
... And what did you think it would end up like?? Just curious haha.
Taemin needs to take more control in Ontae stories, it's a seriously lacking element haha.
SOBS WITTY. THANK YOU!
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i don't really know--maybe something without a make out session (ngl it made me very happy though so it's a good thing ♥) or. idk. i guess i was just expecting like, a peck by the middle of it all (i'm sorry, i'm usually not that slow 8( )
...ontae is lacking, in general. honestly D: like WHY sobsob
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LOL I am glad you could relate so personally to my story. And yes, I tend to make my comments out loud while I am on the internet too. For those who don't understand that reaction, it's their loss lolol.
Hmmm I dunno, I just don't actually see Onew as clumsy as people make him out to be lolol. I mean before Key went on that reality show, I actually think it might have been Onew who was the best cook out of Shinee.
LOL THE KISSING SCENE. That was ridiculous but I am glad you liked it. AND YES FELLOW ONTAE STAN(?) I AGREE. Taemin always looks at Onew.
/accepts cookies... THANK YOU! ♥
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I LOVE how eccentric taem is in this!
and omg, ontae is loooooooooooooove<3333
I barely ever see any ontae fics around~ D;
Update soon! <3
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lolol I dunno about updating soon, since I am very lazy when it comes to writing fics despite all the ideas I have. I'll try though.
Thank you!
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And yes, ontae is a perfect match. ♥
Thank you~!
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