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Fanfiction: Taste Bud Issues

May 10, 2010 15:25

Title: Taste Bud Issues
Genre: Romance/Humour
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ontae and Jongkey (Mentions of 2min)
Summary: Taemin has severe relationship problems for a reason that could only be considered completely odd by his shrink, Kim Kibum.
A/N: About 5000 words.

( “It didn’t last with Sulli because she gave me cavities.” )

pairing: jongkey, pairing: ontae, rating: pg-13, shinee, !fanfiction, ikui

Comments 45

hyukielove May 11 2010, 00:13:57 UTC

THAT WAS SOOO CUTE <3333 OMG DUBU!! T_T:DD IM NOT REALLY A ONTAEM SHIPPER BUT WOOOW. THIS WAS SO FREAKIN CUTEE <3 AMAAZING OMFG :DD. ADN THE JONGKEY LOL ~ CAPPUCINO WAHA XD OH JJONGY !

ikui May 11 2010, 23:42:54 UTC

BECOME AN ONTAE SHIPPER. NOW. lololol jk
HEHE THANK YOU!!! /excessive caps

volatileflame May 11 2010, 00:47:44 UTC

soooooo cute X3

ikui May 11 2010, 23:44:00 UTC

:D Thanks~!

elfrulezforever May 11 2010, 02:05:04 UTC

hehe very funny how they just met and already in a relationship...5 stars for you

ikui May 11 2010, 23:44:45 UTC

lol I rushed their relationship just a teensy little bit maybe. Thanks~! XD

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ikui May 11 2010, 23:45:44 UTC

:O Thank you for reading this then! Hehe Taemin is adorbs in a snarky disobedient way.

shineeblue May 11 2010, 05:58:19 UTC

this is like the best ontae fic ever... <3 <3 <3 very fun and entertaining to read... not one dull moment... and such an interesting point of view taemin has... :)) and talk about 'so sweet it'd give you cavities' being literal... :))

loved the jongkey moments... jonghyun is so whipped, dashing like that and even offering to buy cappuccino... <3 yey for jongkey~! and yey for taemin messing with their 'logic and sanity'... :)) kimchi theory... -.-

i am a 2MIN fan, but a fortunate surprise, i didn't get that sad over them not ending up with each other here... i really felt that taemin is for onew rather than minho in this fic... ^^ and minho's competitiveness is such a big LOL...XD

ontae is indeed very amusing... onew is so sweet preparing the get-to-know-each-other dinner, he even did all the cleaning up... and for all his goodness, the prize of getting *harassed* by taemin... :)) though he obviously enjoyed it... and i believe that they'd be such good boyfriends to one another... totally meant to be... <3 wonder how shocked and ( ... )

ikui May 11 2010, 23:49:24 UTC

;____; Oh my gosh, thank you but really really, there are much better Ontae fics out there.

Hehe, I think that in most relationships Jonghyun would be the one more ready to comply to his partner. And for liking 2min, thanks for putting up with me breaking them apart. T_T

Jongkey will be very shocked, maybe, at Taemin's steak kiss boyfriend lolol. Thank you~!