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Fanfiction: Taste Bud Issues

May 10, 2010 15:25

Title: Taste Bud Issues
Genre: Romance/Humour
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ontae and Jongkey (Mentions of 2min)
Summary: Taemin has severe relationship problems for a reason that could only be considered completely odd by his shrink, Kim Kibum.
A/N: About 5000 words.

( “It didn’t last with Sulli because she gave me cavities.” )

pairing: jongkey, pairing: ontae, rating: pg-13, shinee, !fanfiction, ikui

Comments 45

hikaritsubasa May 11 2010, 06:02:06 UTC

this is so cute....
when i read the part about minho kisses taste like dark chocolate...
i was thinking is jinki's kisses going to be taste like chicken...
lol...
but to wrote tofu...
and that is cute too...

ikui May 11 2010, 23:50:59 UTC

LOL KISSES LIKE CHICKEN. I didn't even think like that. But I did put umami, so technically Jinki's kisses taste like mean?? Oh well close enough.

Thank you!

ikui May 11 2010, 23:52:12 UTC

meat' gdi typo ;___;

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ikui May 11 2010, 23:54:43 UTC

Oh I'm glad you think I took a different perspective on things. :)
Yes, yes Key would totally shove his hand in Jonghyun's face. I think so too.

Thank you~!

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ikui May 12 2010, 21:56:00 UTC

lolol You mean the giant make out session? thankies~!

dralinalucius May 12 2010, 10:44:40 UTC

OMG! This is so damn cute! Ontae is ♥ ♥ love love love love love it ♥ ♥

ikui May 12 2010, 21:56:29 UTC

Thank you~! ♥

r1you May 13 2010, 21:51:16 UTC

OMG!! I really loved this!! It was so amusing and I love their characterizations.

LOL. Poor Onew. Taemin is so overpowering and Onew is so bewildered but goes along with it in the end.

The thing about kisses having tastes was really creative. Though I can't imagine wanting to have kisses that always taste like steak. Kekeke. This is definitely going in my memories.