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Kanjani8 - Card Games - Ryo/Uchi

Apr 20, 2008 20:09

Title: Card Games
Fandom: Kanjani8
Rating: R
Pairing: Ryo/Uchi
Disclaimer: This is a fictional situation that never happened.
Notes: Angst.

( Ryo's jeans hang over the back of the sofa, his keys half falling out of the pocket. )

ryo/uchi, ryo, uchi, kanjani8

Comments 21

love_akira April 21 2008, 07:03:26 UTC

more please??
it's just that i had this weird and unsettling feeling while reading this and i really like that feeling...so please,
I really need more RyoUchi.,

airairo April 25 2008, 03:15:42 UTC

I need more RyoUchi, too. *_* I'll probably write more of them, they're sort of eating my brain a bit. XD Thank you! ♥

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airairo April 25 2008, 03:16:05 UTC

Hee! *_* Thank you very much! ♥

impynymph April 21 2008, 13:08:41 UTC

I've like... tried to comment with COHERENCE.
FLAILS.

The. it's. it's not awkward because they're friends but, all the stuff they aren't saying makes it .. odd and they're all unsure and dslkfjklas. It's a different atmosphere and...I like it and the way you've written it is really nice.
They're boys and have trouble with emotions and talking about them and they sort of know what they want, but can't really express it and it is slightly frustrating.

I like this a lot ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

I REALLY LIKE IT AND I THINK IT IS AMAZING AND YOU ARE AWESOME, ILU AND YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE RYO/UCHI.

Coherent n/n?

(LJ ALMOST ATE MY COMMENT AND I WAS GOING TO SAD FACE AND CRY BUT IT MAGICALLY COME BACK)

airairo April 25 2008, 03:16:46 UTC

Aww, Noelle. ♥♥ Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! x:

ceathair April 21 2008, 14:46:32 UTC

This was well...I think everything has been said actually. But ackward Ryo/Uchi gave me a weird vibe, but it's a good weird vibe, when you still feel the impression you had when you read hours later and it gives you goosepumps still...then it's good.

Yay! Another Ryo/Uchi authoress XD. Soon, you'll write more, right?

airairo April 25 2008, 03:18:01 UTC

Thank you, Kath! ♥♥ I'm glad you liked it!

I will probably write more RyoUchi. x: I really like them. *_*

elyndys April 24 2008, 01:41:10 UTC

Oioioioi, I'm not sure I can approve of this, dragging me into the world of RyoUchi! XD I mean, of course I was going to read it, as it's you, but I didn't expect to enjoy it quite as much as I did! ♥ I loved the subtlety of it, the dream sequences and memories and how seamlessly they were worked together. You're so talented - in case I haven't said it before! ;D Though I hope you'll continue to also write pairings I like more... ^_~

airairo April 25 2008, 03:21:09 UTC

Haha! XD I take it as a huge compliment that you read it. ;D But I'm really glad you liked it!

Thank you so much! ♥