Kanjani8 - Card Games - Ryo/Uchi

[theotheralissa]

Title: Card Games
Fandom: Kanjani8
Rating: R
Pairing: Ryo/Uchi
Disclaimer: This is a fictional situation that never happened.
Notes: Angst.

Comments

[bloodybrilliant]

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YOU KNOW. You should definitely write more of them. This has an odd, unsure feel to it that I really like. Its fitting. Its different and unsteady and so much unsaid. <33333

I'd like to think eventually, they figure out a way to say those things and it made the unsure go away. :)

I LOVE THIS. I LOVE YOU. KEEP WRITING RYOUCHI OMG. lskdfjlskdjflsdkjf

I love the dreams and how the dreams had bits of reality when they happened later oddly. lfdskjlkdfj OR YOU KNOW. LIKE HOW GEN SAID TO YOU. THAT TOO. AND LIKE THE UNSURE WHAT IS REAL AND NOT AND. YES.

FLAILS AT YOU.

[airairo]

Thank you! ♥♥ x: x:

I'm so glad you liked it! *_*

[araanaz9]

Everything I said earlier still stands. And in case you forget, here:

Gen: Whoa
Gen: That's... that's kind of intense
Rissa: bad intense? D:
Gen: No
Gen: It's... it's very hard to write something like that well
Gen: And I think you pulled it off very well
Rissa: i feel like there is a "but" somewhere XD
Gen: Like, I love how it always comes back to the same details, like it's some kind of anchor, something that ties you to reality
Rissa: <33333
Gen: There's not real but. I'm thinking. This kind of thing, it makes me want to sit back and think.
Rissa: i wanted to write something where like, you're not sure which parts are dream, but you're sure that ryo wants to be there for him and uchi wants him there but is frustrated
Gen: You succeeded
Gen: That's pretty much what it feels like
Gen: The feeling is there. And the rest is kind of blurry.
Rissa: i'm glad it came across that way!
Gen: <333
Gen: You're awesome, love
Gen: Like, really
Rissa: <3333333333
Gen: You're amazing
(And it got a bit too much for public eyes. ;D)

[airairo]

Thank you, Gen! ♥♥

[rainymemories]

Awww, that was lovely. A little =/ at time where I thought it was real but then it was a dream, *pats Ryo*. I hope the next day is a lot better for them! :) I have hope!♥ Anyways, I really enjoyed it! A lot!♥

[airairo]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! ♥

[samikitty]

wow~~ that was so... dreamlike. *O* it was gorgeous the way it moved from dream to reality and back. *O* and i loved how tentative the boys were with each other and with themselves and yet somehow at the same time they were both completely at ease. how lovely! *O*

[airairo]

Thank you very much! ♥

[pashoshi]

This confuses my logic-demanding brain a lot, but...not in a bad way? Like, I can't quite put it all together, but the feeling is the same regardless. I really like how you write them, not all fluffy and adorable the way a lot of people do, but sort of a mix of awkward and comfortable where they're definitely friends but not quite more. It really fits, I think.

I'm kind of rambling, but the point is: this is shiny and you should write lots and lots more Ryo/Uchi.

I'm assuming this isn't the one with the pretty princesses? ;-)

[airairo]

I'm so glad you liked this! ♥ Writing these two makes me nervous. XD And I dooo want to write more of them. *_* Thank you, Ilana. ♥♥

Hee. ;D