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[theoriginal_ist]

Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Characters: Dorothy, Treize, Zechs, Noin, Relena.
Note: Chapter four.  This is posted a bit earlier since the previous was posted a bit later.
Summary: They were born into a world of soldiers and politicians, aristocrats and royalty.  A world where there are two sides to every story, two

Comments

[terravayne]

Treize knew about Relena's real identity this early on? Eek. I'm pretty sure that he doesn't know Zechs has any blood relatives living until after Noin asks him to call off the attack on Relena in episode 6. I think his words were literally, "Hmm, so the rumors were true. He still has a living blood relative. He could've said something." ^^;

Other than a potential continuity issue, I liked this chapter a lot. Noin and Zechs have such great chemistry and subtle flirting going on, with a dash of jealousy on the side. And Dorothy is slowly being groomed into the biting, abrasive aristocrat she'll become. Very insightful!

[theoriginal_ist]

::stares:: You remember the episode and the quote? ::bows before you:: Yes, I remember that part. I don't think if I wrote that Treize knew who she was. I was aiming more for him knowing Zechs had taken an interest (aka was keeping tabs on her) in her and he was using her to manipulate him. ::looks back over fic:: Mm, yes, I think that part was misplaced in the editing process. Thank you for noticing!

I adore Noin and Zechs and I always see him as rather...dense when it comes to their relationship/her feelings. So it's fun to play with. And Dorothy! I'm glad you like her since I adore how you write her in your Valhalla fic.

[terravayne]

Haha, my memory's nowhere near that good. I had a faint inkling about it so I checked on aboutgundamwing.com -- it's my favorite resource for looking up trivia and maintaining continuity. If you haven't checked it out yet, DO. It's an amazing resource since it has episode transcripts and screenshots and timelines, etc. ^^;

[theoriginal_ist]

Okay, for a second there you had be worried. Lol.

Psh. It's on my favorites list. I live off of that thing most times. The timeline and transcripts especially. I haven't gotten to the screenshots yet though.

[schizoid_sprite]

I love this chapter! Heeee! You're making me love Zechs and Noin more. Hm, yeah, despite that 'Treize-knows-about-Relena' flaw, I'd say it's just as good as the previous chapters. That sunglass thing made me remember Relena's episode zero, too. He's wearing them there, too, right? Makes me wonder how long it has been since he met her there, in ep.zero. I thinks that's where he knew he's still has a living blood relative:

[theoriginal_ist]

::sigh:: Yes. The Treize Knowing Flaw. I'm still debating on editing because in later chapters he only thinks Zechs has this infatuation with her (since she shares a name with his sister, who he's never met). BUT I am rather lazy and that seems like a lot of work at the moment.

Dorothy is an amazing character. I love her oh-so much. Hehe. I'm glad you like her too.

I will continue! I will update on Sunday. No worries. This is a story that has Taken Over My Brain and Refuses To Ransom It Back. Terribly dreadful thing. Thank you for your lovely comments!