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[theoriginal_ist]

Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Characters: Dorothy, Treize, Zechs, Noin, Relena.
Note: Chapter four.  This is posted a bit earlier since the previous was posted a bit later.
Summary: They were born into a world of soldiers and politicians, aristocrats and royalty.  A world where there are two sides to every story, two

Comments

[terravayne]

Treize knew about Relena's real identity this early on? Eek. I'm pretty sure that he doesn't know Zechs has any blood relatives living until after Noin asks him to call off the attack on Relena in episode 6. I think his words were literally, "Hmm, so the rumors were true. He still has a living blood relative. He could've said something." ^^;

Other than a potential continuity issue, I liked this chapter a lot. Noin and Zechs have such great chemistry and subtle flirting going on, with a dash of jealousy on the side. And Dorothy is slowly being groomed into the biting, abrasive aristocrat she'll become. Very insightful!

[theoriginal_ist]

::stares:: You remember the episode and the quote? ::bows before you:: Yes, I remember that part. I don't think if I wrote that Treize knew who she was. I was aiming more for him knowing Zechs had taken an interest (aka was keeping tabs on her) in her and he was using her to manipulate him. ::looks back over fic:: Mm, yes, I think that part was misplaced in the editing process. Thank you for noticing!

I adore Noin and Zechs and I always see him as rather...dense when it comes to their relationship/her feelings. So it's fun to play with. And Dorothy! I'm glad you like her since I adore how you write her in your Valhalla fic.

[terravayne]

Haha, my memory's nowhere near that good. I had a faint inkling about it so I checked on aboutgundamwing.com -- it's my favorite resource for looking up trivia and maintaining continuity. If you haven't checked it out yet, DO. It's an amazing resource since it has episode transcripts and screenshots and timelines, etc. ^^;

[theoriginal_ist]

Okay, for a second there you had be worried. Lol.

Psh. It's on my favorites list. I live off of that thing most times. The timeline and transcripts especially. I haven't gotten to the screenshots yet though.

[terravayne]

Haha, I sincerely hope I'm never that much of an obsessive, crashing bore. ^^; And yeah, aboutgw has been so good to me. Seriously, I can't imagine the sheer number of hours and hours it would take to compile all of that. o_O

[theoriginal_ist]

Lol. I hope I'm not either, but it could be kind of cool at the same time. A walking encyclopedia... Gosh. My brain would die from that amount of research. But I am ever so grateful to those who do it and make my life so much easier.