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[theoriginal_ist]

Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Characters: Dorothy, Treize, Zechs, Noin, Relena.
Note: Chapter four.  This is posted a bit earlier since the previous was posted a bit later.
Summary: They were born into a world of soldiers and politicians, aristocrats and royalty.  A world where there are two sides to every story, two

Comments

[schizoid_sprite]

I love this chapter! Heeee! You're making me love Zechs and Noin more. Hm, yeah, despite that 'Treize-knows-about-Relena' flaw, I'd say it's just as good as the previous chapters. That sunglass thing made me remember Relena's episode zero, too. He's wearing them there, too, right? Makes me wonder how long it has been since he met her there, in ep.zero. I thinks that's where he knew he's still has a living blood relative:




I love your Dorothy!
“I thought it might be amusing.” The smile flickers and her eyes light briefly. “I wasn’t terribly disappointed, but it was less dramatic than I had anticipated.”

-Reminds me of the scene where she set up Heero and Relena in the manga battlefield of the pacifist. She expects a rather emotional reunion from them, and fails miserably when they just stare at each other and continues to be trapped saying 'Heero', 'Relena' and blah blah.

hee! Your Dorothy is SO DOROTHY! I love you! Hee!
Please, please continue!

[theoriginal_ist]

::sigh:: Yes. The Treize Knowing Flaw. I'm still debating on editing because in later chapters he only thinks Zechs has this infatuation with her (since she shares a name with his sister, who he's never met). BUT I am rather lazy and that seems like a lot of work at the moment.

Dorothy is an amazing character. I love her oh-so much. Hehe. I'm glad you like her too.

I will continue! I will update on Sunday. No worries. This is a story that has Taken Over My Brain and Refuses To Ransom It Back. Terribly dreadful thing. Thank you for your lovely comments!