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[theniwokesoftly]

Go easy on me, y'all, I've never written a fic with actual sex before. Or an original fic. And yes, this is NC-17 femslash, not work safe, so no one read it if you're uncomfortable with that (eaterofnoodles, I'm looking at you).

And yes, Leah is based somewhat on me.

Comments

[uncut_diamond]

Is it wrong that I sort of read this as an instruction manuel? :p

[theniwokesoftly]

Heh, I'm sure some woman will be happy for that. Remember when I told you I didn't think reading my journal would be as exciting as you thought it would be? Yeah, it might be exciting after all if I continue this story like people want me to.

[uncut_diamond]

Anything I can do to learn how to better please the next girl in my life the better. :)

But yeah, I like reading your journal. Please don't equate a lack of comments with a lack of interest.

[theniwokesoftly]

Heh, I think it's an average journal, I was just talking about lesbian action, since I believe when I told you nearly my entire flist was female, and a large percentage of them lesbians, your immediate reaction was ooooh your journal's gonna be fun, huh. Yeah, normality, not that. But I'm glad you think it's interesting.

[supersteph]

I like that you were very descriptive and exact in what was happening, instead of skirting around it. (no pun intended:)

[theniwokesoftly]

There would be no point in the story if I didn't elaborate, would there? I'm glad you like it.

[sooozie1982]

!! This is excellent. Have you written anything else?

[theniwokesoftly]

Thanks! Just a couple of A/O drabbles. One is up on svufiction under Sing1118. It's called "Sway" and I wrote it for the "First Times" challenge on obfangrrl. It was my favorite thing I'd written until this.

I'm gonna work on this today, expanding it, and I'm going to submit it for the originals on ralst.com.

[echoardi]

What a nice hw distraction. ;)

[theniwokesoftly]

Glad you enjoyed it.

[snuffnyc]

all kinds of minimalist hot. i like it, you should continue!