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Mar 24, 2010 13:06

stars on a string, Nine/Rose (& Ten/Rose), PG
And I will give you the stars on a string.

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:rowofstars, challenge 28, :nylana

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stillxmyxheart March 24 2010, 18:13:28 UTC
Run with me,
And I will give you the stars on a string,
The universe at your feet, time and space,
The trappings of infinity.

You take yours with milk and stardust, right?
One spoon or two?

It ends in the way it begins,
With a burning sun and loneliness
And the amaranthine passage of seconds.
And regrets.

So I am left with nothing
And with memories fleeting,
With your scent and the ghost of your footprints in the hall,
And words, words, words that could have and should have
Passed from my lips to your ear, to the slope of your neck,
And the delicate space between your breasts.

*breathy, happy sigh* Yeah, I feel like I just quoted this whole thing at you, but it's all so gorgeous and I just... I love it. I already told you that and I'm gonna tell you again, I love this.

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rowofstars March 24 2010, 18:17:23 UTC
Thank you so much, bb. Your initial reaction email made me finish this. And I'm so glad. *squishes*

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rowofstars March 24 2010, 18:48:12 UTC
THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR THIS.

Just know I'm incoherent from this. Yep.

D'awwww! *blushes* Thank you so much!! ♥ I don't think I've ever been as nervous about posting a fic as I was about this. THANK YOU.♥♥

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rowofstars March 24 2010, 18:54:37 UTC
Thank you!

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morrighangw March 24 2010, 22:07:05 UTC
OMG. This....this... *flails* Amazing! So poignant and you just want to give the Doctor a hug.

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rowofstars March 24 2010, 23:20:45 UTC
Thank you so much!

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tribalmink March 24 2010, 22:33:04 UTC
It’s all out there for the taking,
So here’s my hand and my smile,
And an offer I’d make to you time and time and
Time again, even though I know how it ends.

This is gorgeous!!!

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rowofstars March 24 2010, 23:31:33 UTC
Thank you!

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