This, right here, this is them, their beginning and their end and all the bits in between that really matter, that really mean something just between the two of them.
That's exactly how I wanted it to feel. Thank you again, I'm so glad you liked it.
You have made my day. This is honestly the first poetry I've ever written and I really didn't think it was anywhere near the awesome that has been posted during this challenge. *grins like an idiot*
My dear, this is a direct quote from one of your comments over at my journal:
so I don't hold out much hope that poetry (which I fail at) will work out any better
Please cross-reference Exhibit A with Exhibit B:
I need a hand to hold and Fingers splayed against the skin of my palm, my wrist, my cheek, (My bare back, slick and warm, and you, you, you Under my sheets.) It’s all out there for the taking, So here’s my hand and my smile, And an offer I’d make to you time and time and Time again, even though I know how it ends.
... DO YOU NOT SEE THE DISCREPANCY HERE?!
Because this is so not failure. This is pure gold. I feel incredibly wealthy just having this in my life. To reread over and over and over again. It's like you can hear and feel all the seconds of their time together running out, and its fast and desperate and sensual and all around just brilliant.
I feel incredibly wealthy just having this in my life.
I hope you realize that this is all your fault. When I read your poem, it was like I could see the whole thing play out in my head, and I thought maybe if I tried I could write something half as good. I'm over the moon that you liked it so much!! ♥ THANK YOU. SO FREAKING MUCH. (and more ♥♥♥)
Thank you! I'm glad the formatting it worked for you, I was iffy on that for a while. I couldn't leave it at a sad ending, so I had hoped that it would bring it back around to some simply the Doctor and Rose. Again, thank you so much for the lovely comment!
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This, right here, this is them, their beginning and their end and all the bits in between that really matter, that really mean something just between the two of them.
That's exactly how I wanted it to feel. Thank you again, I'm so glad you liked it.
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so I don't hold out much hope that poetry (which I fail at) will work out any better
Please cross-reference Exhibit A with Exhibit B:
I need a hand to hold and
Fingers splayed against the skin of my palm, my wrist, my cheek,
(My bare back, slick and warm, and you, you, you
Under my sheets.)
It’s all out there for the taking,
So here’s my hand and my smile,
And an offer I’d make to you time and time and
Time again, even though I know how it ends.
... DO YOU NOT SEE THE DISCREPANCY HERE?!
Because this is so not failure. This is pure gold. I feel incredibly wealthy just having this in my life. To reread over and over and over again. It's like you can hear and feel all the seconds of their time together running out, and its fast and desperate and sensual and all around just brilliant.
I LOVE THIS. AND YOU. SO VERY MUCH ♥.
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... DO YOU NOT SEE THE DISCREPANCY HERE?!
I PLEAD THE FIFTH.
I feel incredibly wealthy just having this in my life.
I hope you realize that this is all your fault. When I read your poem, it was like I could see the whole thing play out in my head, and I thought maybe if I tried I could write something half as good. I'm over the moon that you liked it so much!! ♥ THANK YOU. SO FREAKING MUCH. (and more ♥♥♥)
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this is perfectly messily achingly beautiful.
Thank you so much!! I adore flailing reactions.
TEA AND STARDUST YES YES YES.
This was my favorite part and I'm so giddy someone else liked it! One should always have stardust in their tea if at all possible.
because it is such a fantastic bookend for their relationship.
I feel the same way. There are lot of things that came back around for them which makes a lot of the way they started and ended very bittersweet.
I want to carry this with me and break it out at random moments just to remember how transcendent good writing can be.
*dies* I have no words for how awesome this makes me feel. THANK YOU.
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thank you for sharing bb <3
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