Thanks for the feedback. Though... I'm not sure if you actually liked it or not, lol.
Anyway, that's why I never wrote fanfic until very recently - because they're not my characters to manipulate. I can't formulate their personalities into what I need them to be for my purposes because they already have personalities of their own.
At the same time though, we don't see all of their personalities. And, this is just my take on who they are, how they would be when put into this situation. Everyone has different views about the boys and not everyone agrees. Like, I hate the stories where Dean is very aggressive with Sam, etc.
As for an AU, I may have to change that - because the way I see it going, there are going to be key differences. So, I'll keep that in mind - and most likely end up changing it to one, lol.
The lack of action was the one thing that even I didn't like about this story! When I went back over it, I just couldn't figure out a way to make them more active. Plus, description isn't my best quality as a writer. I can do
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I'm glad you like it! I'm working on the next part...well...I have been for, like, a week now, lol. I'm going to try to finish it up tonight. Hopefully the boys will cooperate with me. *grin*
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I'm glad you like this! Even though ti's posted, I'm still not too sure about it.... *shrugs*
Thanks for reading!
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I'll be waiting for the next part. :)
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I'm waiting for the next part as well, lol. It should be up by the end of the week! *crosses fingers*
Maybe you should cross your fingers, too. Just in case. ;)
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Anyway, that's why I never wrote fanfic until very recently - because they're not my characters to manipulate. I can't formulate their personalities into what I need them to be for my purposes because they already have personalities of their own.
At the same time though, we don't see all of their personalities. And, this is just my take on who they are, how they would be when put into this situation. Everyone has different views about the boys and not everyone agrees. Like, I hate the stories where Dean is very aggressive with Sam, etc.
As for an AU, I may have to change that - because the way I see it going, there are going to be key differences. So, I'll keep that in mind - and most likely end up changing it to one, lol.
The lack of action was the one thing that even I didn't like about this story! When I went back over it, I just couldn't figure out a way to make them more active. Plus, description isn't my best quality as a writer. I can do ( ... )
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Wonderful job. I love the emotion, and who can go wrong with a Jealous!Sam.
*thumbs up and toothy smile* haha..
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I'm hoping the second one will be better. *sheepish grin*
It should be up by the end of the week! :)
Thanks for reading!
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Thanks for reading!!
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