Thanks for the feedback. Though... I'm not sure if you actually liked it or not, lol.
Anyway, that's why I never wrote fanfic until very recently - because they're not my characters to manipulate. I can't formulate their personalities into what I need them to be for my purposes because they already have personalities of their own.
At the same time though, we don't see all of their personalities. And, this is just my take on who they are, how they would be when put into this situation. Everyone has different views about the boys and not everyone agrees. Like, I hate the stories where Dean is very aggressive with Sam, etc.
As for an AU, I may have to change that - because the way I see it going, there are going to be key differences. So, I'll keep that in mind - and most likely end up changing it to one, lol.
The lack of action was the one thing that even I didn't like about this story! When I went back over it, I just couldn't figure out a way to make them more active. Plus, description isn't my best quality as a writer. I can do the flowery emotional stuff, and I'm working on improving the rest. I'm a fairly passionate person so the emotion and thoughts are just what comes easiest to me. And, that's what most of this story is about: the internal monlogues, the feelings of the boys & how they're dealing with the pressures of the job and what they're doing with each other.
The second one, I hope will be more to your liking. Especially, since there's more action involved. But, I have to warn you, thoughts and feelings are going to play a major part in this whole 'verse. *shrugs* It's important in the way it's going to end up.
So, im summation, lol. I'm sorry if you didn't like it, but I'll take everything you said into consideration for the rest of the arc! Thanks for reading. :)
Anyway, that's why I never wrote fanfic until very recently - because they're not my characters to manipulate. I can't formulate their personalities into what I need them to be for my purposes because they already have personalities of their own.
At the same time though, we don't see all of their personalities. And, this is just my take on who they are, how they would be when put into this situation. Everyone has different views about the boys and not everyone agrees. Like, I hate the stories where Dean is very aggressive with Sam, etc.
As for an AU, I may have to change that - because the way I see it going, there are going to be key differences. So, I'll keep that in mind - and most likely end up changing it to one, lol.
The lack of action was the one thing that even I didn't like about this story! When I went back over it, I just couldn't figure out a way to make them more active. Plus, description isn't my best quality as a writer. I can do the flowery emotional stuff, and I'm working on improving the rest. I'm a fairly passionate person so the emotion and thoughts are just what comes easiest to me. And, that's what most of this story is about: the internal monlogues, the feelings of the boys & how they're dealing with the pressures of the job and what they're doing with each other.
The second one, I hope will be more to your liking. Especially, since there's more action involved. But, I have to warn you, thoughts and feelings are going to play a major part in this whole 'verse. *shrugs* It's important in the way it's going to end up.
So, im summation, lol. I'm sorry if you didn't like it, but I'll take everything you said into consideration for the rest of the arc! Thanks for reading. :)
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