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"Promises Unbroken, A Love Kept" (Primeval)

May 24, 2009 08:20

Fandom: ---Primeval---
Characters: Abby, Connor, Captain Strong, and three soldiers
Story: "Paid in Blood: Promises Unbroken, A Love Kept" (Part 2/3)
Rating: M
Warnings/Spoilers: swearing, extreme angst, violence (1,681 wc)
Theme music: "Death is the Road to Awe" by Clint Mansell from "The Fountain"
Author's Note: This was written ahead of schedule ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

fredbassett May 24 2009, 19:49:07 UTC

Well I don't like Strong! Poor brave Connor.

a1cmustangpilot May 24 2009, 20:19:59 UTC

I need to post his bio but he is an extremely wicked guy with a very dark past. I came up with a backstory to Danny based on some theories I had with his character so this is part of it. But at least we know what happened to Connor and why Nick was upset when he was holding Bluebird outside the burning building.
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daxie42 May 25 2009, 06:06:40 UTC

Oh nooooo poor Connor, poor Abby, Danny isn't really dead is he? *Runs off to read next part*

a1cmustangpilot May 25 2009, 07:02:01 UTC

I cannot say... :(

This was the hardest story to write so far.
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a1cmustangpilot May 25 2009, 10:22:51 UTC

If I can I'll be working on it tomorrow. I ran out of time in the morning and right now am working on something else unfortunately. But it will be up real soon. Thank you for reading this!
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reggietate May 25 2009, 11:00:45 UTC

Eeeep! Strong's a right bastard, isn't he *huggles brave Connor*

a1cmustangpilot May 25 2009, 11:13:03 UTC

Yes he is. And the troublesome thing is, I haven't figured out a proper finish for him. I don't know if it is going to be Connor who eventually puts him down or what. I'm really wanting Connor to come through as being the hero that he is. Thank you for reading!
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talliw May 25 2009, 20:47:59 UTC

OMG, poor Connor. Where are Becker and his man when you need them?*weeps, than attacks Strong*

a1cmustangpilot May 26 2009, 00:49:32 UTC

Unfortunately the Becker brigade is only a minute behind and in a situation like this, it's seconds that count. :( Thank you for reading this and I hope you liked it despite wanting to attack Strong! :)
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talliw May 26 2009, 09:05:30 UTC

The story was great but very disturbing. Your description is so vividly I can see the scene playing before my inner eye. It's hurt to read about all the violence and I want to jump right in to stop it. And knowing that Danny is killed already and cannot help either...
Very powerful stuff.

a1cmustangpilot May 26 2009, 21:54:01 UTC

Disturbing? I like that! Captain Strong is a very twisted man and will stop at nothing to get his revenge while obtaining power. I'm glad that it was able to play out so well! I'm really not looking forward to the next part but I think it's going to be a good conclusion to this one. I just need to be able to write it all now so that way people can see why Strong has such a hatred for Danny. Torturing Connor as well as Bluebird is just plain evil. :(
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