"Promises Unbroken, A Love Kept" (Primeval)

[a1cmustangpilot]

Fandom: ---Primeval---
Characters: Abby, Connor, Captain Strong, and three soldiers
Story: "Paid in Blood: Promises Unbroken, A Love Kept" (Part 2/3)
Rating: M
Warnings/Spoilers: swearing, extreme angst, violence (1,681 wc)
Theme music: "Death is the Road to Awe" by Clint Mansell from "The Fountain"
Author's Note: This was written ahead of schedule

Comments

[deinonychus_1]

oh my god! Meep! This Strong really is a bastard, I hope something really nasty happens to him. If he wanted to kill Conor he could have just shot him, so why is he doing all this instead? Why is he beating him and letting him die slowly? Sadistic bastard! That's what makes this even harder to read, that Connor is going through all this just because Strong seems to be taking pleasure out of watching him suffer. I can see why it's personal against Danny, but what has he got against Connor?

And I forgot to say, poor Abby, having to listen to all that and knowing what was happening to Connor but being powerless to help. In a way it's almost worse for Abby, listening to all that and hurting because of what's happening to Connor, and knowing that if Connor does die then she will be next and the same will probably happen to her.

Where's part 3????? I need to know how it ends!!!

[a1cmustangpilot]

Strong has been gathering intelligence on Danny and knows that he is close to his team. So by torturing Connor, Strong feels that in a way he's also bringing more pain to Danny. Also, Strong loves torture. He's been perfecting the art of it since before Danny even met him while in Bosnia. Strong is truly demented. He enjoys the torment that he brings to others, especially when he knows that he has an audience of the people who care about the one being slowly killed. It's a sick obsession of his, really.

Connor would definitely not let Abby be killed. He'd make sure that he held onto life long enough to know that she was safe before he died. I will try to get to part three as soon as I can, I promise! Thank you for reading! :)
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[mad_arthist]

i'm waiting too. need to read part threeeeee aaaaahhhh.
i' m so excited

[a1cmustangpilot]

Awww I hope to have it written soon. I'm trying to make it perfect so it is a bit slow coming as it is the last part of this particular story series. :) Thank you for reading and I am glad that you are enjoying it!
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