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tmn1966 July 26 2015, 14:24:08 UTC
It’s always good to have a friend that knows you almost better than you know yourself. Of course Jensen doesn’t know about the conversations that Chris and Jared have had, but even so, Chris still could see the handwriting on the wall before anyone said anything, especially when it came to his life-long friend.

And because of this, I’m smiling so hard my face hurts:

“I thought you wanted me to err on the side of caution and be open to moving on?”

“Yeah, well what can I say?” she shrugged with a smile, “I totally ship you guys.”

Jared kind of half-snorted with the hint of a chuckle as he shook his head, "Okay, but if I find out you're writing fic about me, we so can't be friends anymore."

“You wish you were so interesting.”

“I’m plenty interesting.”

Danneel held up finger, “But do you have a cult following?”

Awwwwwww, I cannot even contain myself with this:

“Well I like you a lot too. And,” he said taking Jensen’s hands, he didn’t want to freak him out with the other L word, and good god did he want to kiss him, “Whatever ( ... )

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tmn1966 July 26 2015, 14:25:29 UTC
And the temperature just continues to rise! *gets an actual fan out* Dear lord, honey, you can write the sexy stuff!! And I love that you were able to show just how awkward and shy Jensen felt:

“I don’t-,” Jensen shrugged a little and then shook his head, “Not like this. I can’t-,” not face-to-face. Not yet. But he didn’t know how to say that to Jared. He didn’t want to hurt his feelings again, like he was sure he had earlier.

And then…

*turns fan up to faster speed*

Whoa.

And the whole part in Danneel’s POV after Christmas break. LOVED IT!!! I would love to have some Chris/Genevieve moments. Just sayin’. :P

And this, oh my god, do I even need to say it, do I?:

Chad shrugged again, “You know. When Jared gives it to you,” the second part delivered with a short thrust and fist pump combo ( ... )

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tmn1966 July 26 2015, 14:27:29 UTC
OMG, I am laughing hysterically at this:

Jared shook his head with a playful sigh, caressing Jensen’s back with his hands and bringing them back down to cup his ass, made Jensen gasp, and Jared put every ounce of affection into his words, “Butt munch.”

Punctuated with an extra squeeze that got both boys smirking.

Jensen needed a comeback, he just wasn’t so sure where to go with it, “Dick…swallower.”

Hysterics took them both down and Jensen had flopped down onto the bed next to Jared the two rolling into each other as the laughter swept through them.

Bwa hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha OMG that is just too good!!!!!!

I don’t think there could have been a more perfect last two lines than:

Jensen shook his head, “Dork.”

“Nerd.”Oh sweetie, I can’t believe how wonderful this story is. When I first sent you that email saying I immediately thought of J2 when I read the Dear Abby column that day, I had no idea it would grab hold of you so intensely. But am I ever so glad it did. You brought the story out of those few lines in an ( ... )

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the_rant_girl August 6 2015, 21:42:29 UTC
You know I've been thinking about those Jared and Chris conversations, and I can't quite decide if Jensen would learn about them or not lol because well I mean being honest with each other is important to both of them and I think Jensen would understand :) maybe even tease Chris for playing matchmker/being his fairy godmother, cue my brain delivering an image of Chris totally pissed off that he has wings, because he totally would be LOL ;PBut yeah Chris knows Jensen pretty damn well, and well yeah even that first time Jensen mentioned Jared Chris saw the little flicker of something in Jensen's smile. And well even though Chris was definitely more subtle about it, he did want to see Jensen break out of his shell/accept himself and be happy ( ... )

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argentine65 July 31 2015, 19:32:37 UTC
I just love this story, it make me remember those younger days when you find someone you like and all the doubts and the shame. You are such a good writer. Thank you very much. Martha

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the_rant_girl July 31 2015, 22:41:36 UTC
Aww hon thank you oh so very, very much for reading and leaving such a lovely comment, there is just something so special and magical about young love isn't there? Although in terms of our boys, I always feel that their love is transcendent of all things, lol no matter the form :D *hugs* ♥♥

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masja_17 August 12 2015, 07:05:25 UTC
Aww, this was so sweet!

<3

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the_rant_girl August 12 2015, 18:59:05 UTC
:D:D Thank you so very much!! *hugs* ♥♥

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deanshot November 16 2015, 23:05:02 UTC
Seriously girl, you never needed to doubt this amazing big bang of yours.

I freaking loved it, all the characters were exceptionally written. Chad was adorable in Chad's own way.

I could understand Jensen freaking out over that first kiss, it as completely realistic.

If I could wrap up your characters in this story and run away with them, I would. LOL!

Thanks for sharing sweetie, it was a pleasure to read.

*hugs*

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the_rant_girl November 20 2015, 21:31:37 UTC
Ah my love *smishes and squishes and clings and rolls about with you* thank you oh so very much!! ♥ I am so, so happy that you liked it, your comment totally brightened my day when I read it, and I am especially pleased that you found Chad to be adorable in his Chad-ness lol because well as I've said in this comment section lol having Chad be lovable was definitely one of my goals *nods ( ... )

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dugindeep November 30 2015, 19:20:26 UTC
I finally finished it! So much fun and sweetness between all of the characters. Loved Jared's lil harem of girlfriends, all their side moments were great fun. And of course enjoyed the slow growth between Jared and Jensen, and how Jensen just needed to take time and have Jared there to help him <333

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the_rant_girl December 6 2015, 16:00:59 UTC
Ahh BB!! *snuggles* Thank you so, so much!! ♥♥ I'm really glad that you liked it, and extra yay for harem appreciation :D:D:D I still want to do a story where Jensen is the one with all the girl friends LOL though that would probably end up being j2/danneel ;P ♥♥♥

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