And the temperature just continues to rise! *gets an actual fan out* Dear lord, honey, you can write the sexy stuff!! And I love that you were able to show just how awkward and shy Jensen felt:
“I don’t-,” Jensen shrugged a little and then shook his head, “Not like this. I can’t-,” not face-to-face. Not yet. But he didn’t know how to say that to Jared. He didn’t want to hurt his feelings again, like he was sure he had earlier.
And then…
*turns fan up to faster speed*
Whoa.
And the whole part in Danneel’s POV after Christmas break. LOVED IT!!! I would love to have some Chris/Genevieve moments. Just sayin’. :P
And this, oh my god, do I even need to say it, do I?:
Chad shrugged again, “You know. When Jared gives it to you,” the second part delivered with a short thrust and fist pump combo.
“The fuck?”
And Chad, to his credit, did seem somewhat genuinely clueless when he said, “What?”
“Chad,” Jensen held up his hand, voice firm, “Too far.”
“Okay. Shit. Sorry...” and Jensen had been ready to accept said apology when the next words fell from Chad’s mouth, “but you do have a pretty sweet ass though.”
“Oh my god. Stop talking.”
Jensen didn't know what he found more disturbing, Chad thinking he had a sweet ass or the fact that he assumed that Jensen was the one who bottomed.
Oh Chad, Chad, Chad. *shakes head fondly* But it did bring up something that was an important conversation that Jensen and Jared needed to have.
And you handled that conversation beautifully. Again, even though Jensen is now in a relationship with Jared, he’s having conversations that he’d never had before, never even really thought of, so of course there has to be some awkwardness. Adorable awkwardness :)
And then, and then, and then… oh boy, Jensen knows what he wants and goes and gets it!
*looks at fan sternly* what do you mean the fan settings don’t go any higher?!
And then with the banter to finish the fic, so perfectly:
Jensen scrunched his nose as much from the tickling sensation as from the words that had fallen from Jared’s mouth and shoved Jared a little for the endearment.
“What? Like we can only be disgustingly smooshy when we’re having sex?”
Jared shook his head with a playful sigh, caressing Jensen’s back with his hands and bringing them back down to cup his ass, made Jensen gasp, and Jared put every ounce of affection into his words, “Butt munch.”
Punctuated with an extra squeeze that got both boys smirking.
Jensen needed a comeback, he just wasn’t so sure where to go with it, “Dick…swallower.”
Hysterics took them both down and Jensen had flopped down onto the bed next to Jared the two rolling into each other as the laughter swept through them.
Bwa hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha OMG that is just too good!!!!!!
I don’t think there could have been a more perfect last two lines than:
Jensen shook his head, “Dork.”
“Nerd.”
Oh sweetie, I can’t believe how wonderful this story is. When I first sent you that email saying I immediately thought of J2 when I read the Dear Abby column that day, I had no idea it would grab hold of you so intensely. But am I ever so glad it did. You brought the story out of those few lines in an advice column that I can’t even begin to describe. I am totally and completely in love with all of it and if I could, I would roll around in its wonderful-ness. And yours. Because you are.
Thank you, honey, for creating this wonderful story. Because, you know, I really would’ve hated to hurt you had you not written it. :P
You know I've been thinking about those Jared and Chris conversations, and I can't quite decide if Jensen would learn about them or not lol because well I mean being honest with each other is important to both of them and I think Jensen would understand :) maybe even tease Chris for playing matchmker/being his fairy godmother, cue my brain delivering an image of Chris totally pissed off that he has wings, because he totally would be LOL ;P
But yeah Chris knows Jensen pretty damn well, and well yeah even that first time Jensen mentioned Jared Chris saw the little flicker of something in Jensen's smile. And well even though Chris was definitely more subtle about it, he did want to see Jensen break out of his shell/accept himself and be happy :)
And heeeee I am very pleased that you liked my poking at the fourth wall LOL nods to Show/the boys in real life always amuse me lol so yay!! :D:D
AND &hearts:♥♥ for the speed limit/ticket appeciation!! another one of my fave things and heeeee there had to be cheek kissing right? because killing you with cuteness *nods* ;P
Ahhh the first date was one of the trickier things to write and I was totally silently screaming through it and then while waiting for you to read it haha though of course that was one of the last 14 scenes that I wrote out of order and was totally freaking to the max because draft date was looming lol and I hadn't actually pre-thought of that scene so yes lol *smishes and squishes and clings*
Heeeeeeee YOOOUUUUUUUU and the fans bwa ha, have I mentioned that I love? Because I do *nods* You know how much if a relief it is that the sexy stuff works, because well yeah, and again that "touching yourself" scene was one of the things that popped into my head early on. And we've talked about where Jensen was with relationships/sexuality. And he didn't want to pretend or lead anyone on or risk having some other girl drawing the conclusion Sarah did and then outing him. And He wouldn't want to date someone for the sake of dating someone. He had to feel something.
And haha I think Jared has learned his lesson on making assumptions lol but you know he and Jensen would have had conversations about certain things, and he knows that it's all new to Jensen, but I think that's something he'd have to remind himself of too from time to time. But he cares about Jensen and he really didn't want to push or pressure him into anything :)
and it's always fun to have one of them being a little awkward/shy at some point right? lol and well you know, vulnerability, and with the never having shared something so intimate with someone before.
and le gasp!! Chris/Genevieve moments!! *spanks* ;P lol naughty girl, lol you know how I want to do an ensemble piece, with the delving into ALL the everyone lol but how that would oh so totally absorb my entire life LOL but uh yes, I really wish I could have, and Danni/Misha, you know I'd even had little thoughts of some dialogue for them for their first official meeting. And I so wanted to give Chad a girlfriend lol and of course there should always be more Felicia/Adrianne right? lol ;P
Chad indeed, I couldn't resist, well the dialogue, it happened, I was torn with it actually making it into the fic lol but you convinced me to add it in lol and I am glad I did, because it is Chad, well our Chad anyway lol
and awwww *clings morer* I am so, so glad that you liked the top/bottom convo *smooches* yay for boys being mature and talking about things instead of the other thing LOL ;P
and heeeeeee *lets you borrow my fan too* lol you do make my muse so shiny!happy *licks*
Lame comebacks FTW BABY!! LOL
and you once said you always like my last lines to my stories, that they were powerful, so I'm glad these ones meet that standard...or I hope they do lol
You know I can safely say that no other prompt has slapped me in the face quite like this one did, and I like don't even know, but thoughts, I guess the idea of this Jensen just really resonated with me :) and well you know, bwa ha ha ha ha, yes, you were just as intense in your wanting me to write this, lol but well I suppose since I threw all the details in your face all shiny and tantalizing, and since you were there every step of the way I can maybe forgive the potential for violence, lmao ;P LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH!!! ♥♥♥♥
I seriously cannot ever thank you enough, and ugh these comments on top of all the everything else, you are a GODDESS!! *nods and is never letting you go*
“I don’t-,” Jensen shrugged a little and then shook his head, “Not like this. I can’t-,” not face-to-face. Not yet. But he didn’t know how to say that to Jared. He didn’t want to hurt his feelings again, like he was sure he had earlier.
And then…
*turns fan up to faster speed*
Whoa.
And the whole part in Danneel’s POV after Christmas break. LOVED IT!!! I would love to have some Chris/Genevieve moments. Just sayin’. :P
And this, oh my god, do I even need to say it, do I?:
Chad shrugged again, “You know. When Jared gives it to you,” the second part delivered with a short thrust and fist pump combo.
“The fuck?”
And Chad, to his credit, did seem somewhat genuinely clueless when he said, “What?”
“Chad,” Jensen held up his hand, voice firm, “Too far.”
“Okay. Shit. Sorry...” and Jensen had been ready to accept said apology when the next words fell from Chad’s mouth, “but you do have a pretty sweet ass though.”
“Oh my god. Stop talking.”
Jensen didn't know what he found more disturbing, Chad thinking he had a sweet ass or the fact that he assumed that Jensen was the one who bottomed.
Oh Chad, Chad, Chad. *shakes head fondly* But it did bring up something that was an important conversation that Jensen and Jared needed to have.
And you handled that conversation beautifully. Again, even though Jensen is now in a relationship with Jared, he’s having conversations that he’d never had before, never even really thought of, so of course there has to be some awkwardness. Adorable awkwardness :)
And then, and then, and then… oh boy, Jensen knows what he wants and goes and gets it!
*looks at fan sternly* what do you mean the fan settings don’t go any higher?!
And then with the banter to finish the fic, so perfectly:
Jensen scrunched his nose as much from the tickling sensation as from the words that had fallen from Jared’s mouth and shoved Jared a little for the endearment.
“What? Like we can only be disgustingly smooshy when we’re having sex?”
Jensen nodded, “Yes. Exactly.”
Oh, Jensen, I can so relate to you here.
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Jared shook his head with a playful sigh, caressing Jensen’s back with his hands and bringing them back down to cup his ass, made Jensen gasp, and Jared put every ounce of affection into his words, “Butt munch.”
Punctuated with an extra squeeze that got both boys smirking.
Jensen needed a comeback, he just wasn’t so sure where to go with it, “Dick…swallower.”
Hysterics took them both down and Jensen had flopped down onto the bed next to Jared the two rolling into each other as the laughter swept through them.
Bwa hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha OMG that is just too good!!!!!!
I don’t think there could have been a more perfect last two lines than:
Jensen shook his head, “Dork.”
“Nerd.”
Oh sweetie, I can’t believe how wonderful this story is. When I first sent you that email saying I immediately thought of J2 when I read the Dear Abby column that day, I had no idea it would grab hold of you so intensely. But am I ever so glad it did. You brought the story out of those few lines in an advice column that I can’t even begin to describe. I am totally and completely in love with all of it and if I could, I would roll around in its wonderful-ness. And yours. Because you are.
Thank you, honey, for creating this wonderful story. Because, you know, I really would’ve hated to hurt you had you not written it. :P
♥♥♥
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But yeah Chris knows Jensen pretty damn well, and well yeah even that first time Jensen mentioned Jared Chris saw the little flicker of something in Jensen's smile. And well even though Chris was definitely more subtle about it, he did want to see Jensen break out of his shell/accept himself and be happy :)
And heeeee I am very pleased that you liked my poking at the fourth wall LOL nods to Show/the boys in real life always amuse me lol so yay!! :D:D
AND &hearts:♥♥ for the speed limit/ticket appeciation!! another one of my fave things and heeeee there had to be cheek kissing right? because killing you with cuteness *nods* ;P
Ahhh the first date was one of the trickier things to write and I was totally silently screaming through it and then while waiting for you to read it haha though of course that was one of the last 14 scenes that I wrote out of order and was totally freaking to the max because draft date was looming lol and I hadn't actually pre-thought of that scene so yes lol *smishes and squishes and clings*
Heeeeeeee YOOOUUUUUUUU and the fans bwa ha, have I mentioned that I love? Because I do *nods* You know how much if a relief it is that the sexy stuff works, because well yeah, and again that "touching yourself" scene was one of the things that popped into my head early on. And we've talked about where Jensen was with relationships/sexuality. And he didn't want to pretend or lead anyone on or risk having some other girl drawing the conclusion Sarah did and then outing him. And He wouldn't want to date someone for the sake of dating someone. He had to feel something.
And haha I think Jared has learned his lesson on making assumptions lol but you know he and Jensen would have had conversations about certain things, and he knows that it's all new to Jensen, but I think that's something he'd have to remind himself of too from time to time. But he cares about Jensen and he really didn't want to push or pressure him into anything :)
and it's always fun to have one of them being a little awkward/shy at some point right? lol and well you know, vulnerability, and with the never having shared something so intimate with someone before.
and le gasp!! Chris/Genevieve moments!! *spanks* ;P lol naughty girl, lol you know how I want to do an ensemble piece, with the delving into ALL the everyone lol but how that would oh so totally absorb my entire life LOL but uh yes, I really wish I could have, and Danni/Misha, you know I'd even had little thoughts of some dialogue for them for their first official meeting. And I so wanted to give Chad a girlfriend lol and of course there should always be more Felicia/Adrianne right? lol ;P
Chad indeed, I couldn't resist, well the dialogue, it happened, I was torn with it actually making it into the fic lol but you convinced me to add it in lol and I am glad I did, because it is Chad, well our Chad anyway lol
and awwww *clings morer* I am so, so glad that you liked the top/bottom convo *smooches* yay for boys being mature and talking about things instead of the other thing LOL ;P
and heeeeeee *lets you borrow my fan too* lol you do make my muse so shiny!happy *licks*
Lame comebacks FTW BABY!! LOL
and you once said you always like my last lines to my stories, that they were powerful, so I'm glad these ones meet that standard...or I hope they do lol
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I seriously cannot ever thank you enough, and ugh these comments on top of all the everything else, you are a GODDESS!! *nods and is never letting you go*
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