Worth The Wait: Chapter Five and Epilogue

[the_rant_girl]

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[mdlaw]

This was so sweet, even Chad was endearing (sort of). m :)

[the_rant_girl]

Heee I'm ever so pleased with your assessment of Chad :D:D Thank you for reading and leaving some love, ♥♥

[big_heart_june]

“You give me butterflies.”

THIS! IT'S SWEET PERFECTION ♥ and, aaaah baby, ALL THE AWESOME LADIES and Chris and Chad lol! your brilliant dialogue will never fail to impress and amuse me, it's your biggest talent ♥ LOVED IT ♥♥ loved the build-up to the boys relationship, too, and, eeeee, their first KISS ♥ for eyes. also, wrestling and ohmyfuckinggod the phone sex...*whimpers*
THIS is so hot, too, as was the fingering and Jensen watching...kill me
He wrapped himself round Jared from behind letting his hands slip round and down into Jared’s pockets, “Leave with me,” he breathed hotly against Jared’s ear.

LOVED your cute nod to Show, too, with your adorable last lines ♥ PERFECT ending -- BOYS!! -- to a really loveable gorgeously written fic. You done good, my love, real good and you should be damn proud ♥♥♥ THANK YOU, darling ♥

[the_rant_girl]

Eeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! JUNE!!! AHHH!!!! *touches heart* Gah your thoughts and words always mean so, so much to me Baby *smishes and clings* ♥♥ and well I think you know how much I love writing dialogue lol definitely my favourite part. Thank you, like seriously I am very shiny!happy that you liked my girls!! and the boys too of course lol, it was a lot of fun getting a little more into the other characters, I'd really love to do more of that in future fics too.

and ahhh you and all the things you picked out *licks* I was aiming for disgustingly schmoopy haha, and I just really wanted Jensen to put his hands in Jared's pockets lol I'm always super glad for the sexyness appreciation, lol and squeefulness that you saw the dork/nerd bitch/jerk because YES!! exactly, I LOVE YOU EVEN MORER!! ♥♥♥

[gooferdusty]

Ok, so you have nothing to be nervous about! HELLO?!! You're bloody brilliant! (You make me wish my own muse would fire. I haven't written in an age. But never say never right?!)

Anyway, feedback. Right.
I loved the whole thing. Characterisation felt very natural, you could tell that you really heard their voices as you were writing. Perfect mix of adorable and hot and the slow build was paced just right. I loved it.

Oh, and AU, awkward, fumbling, unsure College/High school Boys are my Kryptonite.
I want to give this fic cupcakes!

Oh and Chad! You even made him loveable! (well, in a Chad way.) You're a genius!

[the_rant_girl]

Haha thank you my lovely *hugs* and exactly *sends shiny vibes to your muse* ♥♥

And ah I am so very happy you said that, because seriously not even kidding this really did just flow, not always linearly but as soon as I read the Dear Abby thing, IDEAS! happened and there were little pockets and snippets of dialogue that HAD to be written lol and well you know I always hope that they do sound real. Dialogue certainly is my driving force lol so yes thanks so much!! ♥

And extra lovings for cupcakes and Kryptonite :D:D:D

And like DUDE shut up!! Because one of my other goals was to make people love/soften up to Chad BWA HA! ;P lol *dances*

♥♥♥

[roxymissrose]

This was very sweet--adorable boys, wonderful friends and lovely banter! Thanks for sharing this! :)

[the_rant_girl]

Thanks so much for reading and leaving love!! *hugs* ♥♥

[tx_devilorangel]

Very, very sweet.

[the_rant_girl]

Thanks so much!! ♥♥