Prompt Post 3

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Fill: All Bets Are Off 5/?

[anonymous]

“A valid point.” Esca swiftly crosses the room and unlocks a desk drawer. He withdraws a large wad of bills before re-locking the drawer and slipping the key into his pocket, then he holds out the cash and waits for Marcus to walk across the room and take it.

“I'm giving you half now,” Esca explains when Marcus reaches for the money. “You'll get the other half at the end of the night.”

Marcus pauses. “How do I know you'll hold up your end of the deal?”

“I'm a man of my word.” Esca thrusts the money in Marcus's outstretched hand. “As long as you hold up your end of the deal you'll get what I promised you.”

Marcus stuffs the cash into his pocket. “So where are we doing this?”

“Doing this,” Esca repeats the words, smirking, “you make it sound so casual

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/?

[ladytiferet]

This is absolutely wonderful! Marcus! Boy! I want to hug you and lick you at the same time :)
Nonnie, how you mic scorching hot with strangely bittersweet and even painful is just magnificent!

I really think Esca begins to understand that Marcus responds best to total honesty and straightforwardness, and it has to be something different from what Esca deals with in his everyday life :) He's bound to be fascinated. And Marcus is so freaking honorable!

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/?

[poziomeczka]

OH NONNIE HOW I LOVE THAT YOU SUPPLY US WITH ALL THE AMAZING PORN AND LOVELY CHARACTERIZATION, AND SIMMERING EMOTIONS UNDERNEATH.

*SIGH* THIS HAS BEEN GLORIOUS.

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/?

[coeurdesoleil]

This is amazing! They are both so lonely and desperate, each in their own way and I love seeing them slowly beginning to "get" each other.

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/?

[anonymous]

I love wild-feral-clever Marcus!

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/?

[awarrington]

Aw, Marcus changed his mind. :)

A great update - thanks! ♥

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/?

[anonymous]

gah, I love this!

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/?

[tracy7307]

NONNIE. THIS IS HOT AS HELL. AND THEY BOTH HAVE ISSUES. which I hope they sort out together I am hooked. I hope there are many more delicious chapters up when I'm home from surgery!

Fill: All Bets Are Off 13/?

[anonymous]

“What made you change your mind

Fill: All Bets Are Off 14/?

[anonymous]

“I can leave.” Marcus's voice pulls Esca from his thoughts, and he realizes he hadn't responded to Marcus's sigh of frustration. “No skin off my back.”

“No,” Esca says, a bit too forcefully. “You're here now, just stay where you are.”

Marcus makes a noise that sounds like a cross between a sigh and a laugh. “You do this a lot too?”

“Define this“Pay people to fuck you and then ask them to spend the night

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 14/?

[greenhoodloxley]

*tilts the bed so they fall into each other's arms*

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 14/?

[poziomeczka]

THEY'RE SO BEAUTIFULLY FUCKED UP GOD I JUST.

CAN'T BREATHE.

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 14/?

[ladytiferet]

WHYYYYYYYYYY SO SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORT! I WANT MORE I WANT THEM ALL, I WANT TO HUG THEM AND LICK THEM!

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 14/?

[coeurdesoleil]

YAAAAYYY UPDATE!!
God they are both so messed up. And they will be so good for each other :P

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 14/?

[aislinnrae]

*flails hard and falls over* Win!

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 14/?

[elzed]

woot! more hardass Marcus and bitchy Esca is a joy! I hope to read more sooooooon... ;)