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Prompt Post 3

Jul 10, 2011 10:08

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Fill: All Bets Are Off 5/? anonymous August 4 2011, 14:39:03 UTC

“A valid point.” Esca swiftly crosses the room and unlocks a desk drawer. He withdraws a large wad of bills before re-locking the drawer and slipping the key into his pocket, then he holds out the cash and waits for Marcus to walk across the room and take it.

“I'm giving you half now,” Esca explains when Marcus reaches for the money. “You'll get the other half at the end of the night.”

Marcus pauses. “How do I know you'll hold up your end of the deal?”

“I'm a man of my word.” Esca thrusts the money in Marcus's outstretched hand. “As long as you hold up your end of the deal you'll get what I promised you.”

Marcus stuffs the cash into his pocket. “So where are we doing this?”

“Doing this,” Esca repeats the words, smirking, “you make it sound so casual ( ... )

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 8/? ladytiferet August 15 2011, 09:04:21 UTC

Oh, bb, that was uberhot! And Esca is so not ready to let Marcus go!
I love Marcus's distancing mechanism, of course he's more into it that he lets know, Esca is the perfect mix of defiant and subby, a challenge, a dare!
And Marcus behaviour, where fight and fuck are basically the same - genius!

Also, you did more than justice to that prompt, the description of his body is freaking mesmerizing :D

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 8/? misspamela August 15 2011, 11:19:01 UTC

Well, DAMN. *fans self*

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 8/? poziomeczka August 15 2011, 12:46:31 UTC

MYSTERIOUS NONNIE ;)

you are the queen of filth. this was just...hot damn

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 8/? anonymous August 15 2011, 21:43:47 UTC

It's both very hot and deep.
You gave us little clues that Marcus might have another background and hates filthy rich, vapid guys, even moreso because he is attracted to him. But of course, Esca might not be that vapid!

"Esca reaches up tentatively, tracing over the tattoos that trail down Marcus's shoulders and biceps, and then down over the marks on his chest. There's a scar on his neck, a scratch across his left nipple, and a smattering of bruises across his right. Esca trails his hand down over Marcus's abdomen, once again thumbing over the bruises there."

For some reason, I find this passage very very hot! It triggers my sexy and h/c buttons!
At the same time, I think that behind his hard shell, though!Marcus really wouldn't mind some tender comfort if it came from someone he trusts and repsects.

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 8/? awarrington August 16 2011, 00:24:33 UTC

Wow, so many unexpected twists and turns in this. I'm loving it! Thanks for updating. ♥

Fill: All Bets Are Off 9/? anonymous August 16 2011, 05:16:12 UTC

(thanks for the comments you guys! just another quick update)Esca attends four different fights before he manages to find Marcus again ( ... )

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 9/? ladytiferet August 16 2011, 11:34:55 UTC

JFC, I would never get tired of Marcus kicking the crap of people!
And Esca is so, so hooked :D

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 9/? elzed August 16 2011, 11:53:10 UTC

Gah. Intense!

Also? Extra hot with a side of hot, and I love the alpha male contest going on between the two of them like whoa!

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 9/? anonymous August 16 2011, 14:27:48 UTC

The chapter ends here? Can't wait till the next instalment.

from author anon anonymous August 16 2011, 19:00:59 UTC

No, the chapter will continue but I'm posting bits as I write it. Sorry to leave it hanging ;)

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 9/? coeurdesoleil August 16 2011, 16:38:51 UTC

Aaaaaa cliffhanger!!
*starts hitting refresh*

Fill: All Bets Are Off 10/? anonymous August 17 2011, 05:49:39 UTC

“What do you want ( ... )

Fill: All Bets Are Off 11/? anonymous August 17 2011, 05:53:32 UTC

The limo ride is uneventful, with Marcus keeping his distance and focusing his attention on the view out the window. He refuses all offers of drinks and refreshments until they're back in Esca's great room and Marcus accepts Esca's last ditch half-joking offer of a glass of water ( ... )

Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/? anonymous August 17 2011, 05:57:36 UTC

Esca is just crawling into bed, suddenly hating his ridiculously expensive 3000 thread count Egyptian cotton sheets, when Marcus walks into his room.

Esca freezes. He's not sure if Marcus is there to argue or insult or fight, and he's on edge as he watches Marcus strip out of his clothes and get into bed beside him. Marcus doesn't speak or move or lash out. He just rests there on his back. It's odd and strangely comforting, and Esca can only stare at the battered and bruised fighter lying in his bed.

“I'll stay until morning.” Marcus mumbles at the ceiling. “Go to sleep.”

Re: Fill: All Bets Are Off 12/? elzed August 17 2011, 07:59:32 UTC

yay update! And they are beginning to connect... ;)

Oh, BAMF Marcus, you;re so hot...

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