Prompt Post 3

Jul 10, 2011 10:08


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Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 1a/? anonymous October 5 2011, 02:13:50 UTC
“I heard Marcus Aquila is getting married.”

Leave it to Placidus. The smug fucker.

Esca is struck silent at the statement. He hadn't heard. No one had mentioned Marcus's name around him in some time, likely to protect him or some other irritating notion - as if he's a wilting flower who needs protection and can't bear to hear the name of his ex lest it send him spiraling into a deep, dark well of endless bitter tears.

And yet, Marcus is getting married. Fucking Christ.Esca can't think of a proper retort for Placidus, he used to depend on Marcus for that, so he just glares and mutters, “good for him ( ... )

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Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 1b/? anonymous October 5 2011, 02:15:08 UTC
Esca doesn't allow himself to think about Marcus until he's back home. He thinks of the wedding, the girl, Old Aquila's estate, but he doesn't think of Marcus until he's alone.

It's been a long while. Fifteen months, three weeks, and a handful of days. That's a lifetime when you're young. A lifetime when you're missing someone.

And he still misses Marcus.

Frustrating, stubborn Marcus, with his old-fashioned notions and that idea he got in his head, telling him he should marry a girl and have babies so he could carry on his father's name. A father he'd hardly known, and could barely remember, and Esca had been so furious with Marcus when he made his decision. When he decided to ruin what they had so he could live up to the imagined expectations of his dead father.

Esca remembered the last few days. The last time they made love, and Marcus had asked Esca to fuck him as slowly as possible, lying back on the bed, eyes half closed, begging Esca to go slower, even slower, as if he was trying to remember every detail and burn it ( ... )

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Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 1c/? anonymous October 5 2011, 02:16:16 UTC
It takes him two days to finally throw some clothes in a backpack and leave. Before he goes, Esca digs through a drawer of papers, searching for the postcard he's sure is in there somewhere. The one Marcus sent a few months after he left, with a stupid sunset on the front, talking about the weather as if he was just on vacation somewhere. He'd included his new address at the bottom, and Esca had only skimmed it before he shoved it in the drawer and refused to look at it again.

He finds it finally, stuck between some receipts and a Chinese takeaway menu. When he plugs the address into his GPS he realizes it's relatively close to Old Aquila's estate. He's not at all surprised. Marcus always loved it up there.

A tiny voice in Esca's head tells him he should probably call first, but he doesn't have Marcus's number, and he's not going for a visit anyway. Esca just needs to see him. Just one last time.

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 1c/? ladytiferet October 5 2011, 06:43:14 UTC
I want to hug Esca so hard :]

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 1c/? coeurdesoleil October 5 2011, 08:12:19 UTC
Oh this was a heartbreaking start! Very well done and I can't wait for more!

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 1c/? tracy7307 October 5 2011, 20:35:56 UTC
NONNIE. You are squeezing my heart here! Nicely done building up poor Esca's heartbreak ♥

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 1c/? originalpuck October 8 2011, 05:38:12 UTC
Awww, Esca. Go sweep him off his feet see him one last time!

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Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 2/? anonymous October 18 2011, 22:08:25 UTC
He's two hours into the drive when he pulls over.

The diner is rundown, the leather seats cracked and peeling, and the jukebox in the corner long broken and dusted over. He'd been there with Marcus once, when they'd gone to see his uncle, and Marcus had laughed at the state of the place. But Esca liked it. He still does. The waitresses still wear little hats, and the lady who takes Esca's order looks like she's worked there since the place first opened. She winks at him and brings him an ice cream soda, “on the house”, and Esca drinks half of it before pulling out his phone and sending a text to Cottia.

[going to see Marcus]He figures she's not near her phone because he eats and pays and is heading back to his car by the time his phone rings ( ... )

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 2/? ladytiferet October 18 2011, 22:28:58 UTC
I know you promised I wouldn't want to kill Marcus, but I sorta want to at least kick him in the shin now :)
Go, Esca and sort out this mess!

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 2/? originalpuck October 19 2011, 05:48:12 UTC
My heart broke a little for Esca. He seems so sad, but determined. I can't wait until he gets there and (hopefully) gives Marcus a piece of his mind.

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 2/? coeurdesoleil October 19 2011, 07:39:28 UTC
Oh god I think this is gonna be one of those fics where every update breaks my heart a little more.

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 2/? poziomeczka October 19 2011, 17:19:21 UTC
Oh god! This is amazing. I love the dialogues and the interactions and cant wait to read more. Marcus better own up!

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Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 3a/? anonymous October 27 2011, 05:30:43 UTC
The sun is just beginning to set when Esca arrives. He parks his car on the street, and double-checks the house number five times before he summons the courage to walk to the front door and ring the bell ( ... )

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Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 3b/? anonymous October 27 2011, 05:32:14 UTC
Marcus steps forward, staring at Esca like he can't quite believe he's there, and he extends his hand to take Esca's jacket.

“It's good to see you,” Marcus says when Esca hands it to him.

“You as well,” Esca says curtly. “I heard the news. Congratulations.”

“Oh,” Marcus pales. “Right. Thanks.”

He crowds Esca in the doorway, his hands holding tight to Esca's jacket, and the three of them stand awkwardly until Marcus seems to realize he should be making introductions. “Sorry, Esca, this is Victoria. Tor, this is Esca.”

She reaches to shake his hand again, and Esca nods at her. “Victoria, pleased to meet you.”

“Call me Tor,” she smiles, “and it's so great you're here! When Marcus said you wouldn't be able to make it to the wedding I was wondering if we'd ever have a chance to meet ( ... )

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Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 3c/? anonymous October 27 2011, 05:34:22 UTC
“She's lovely,” Esca says when they're standing on the front stoop. “Really, I mean that ( ... )

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Re: Sometimes It Lasts In Love, But Sometimes It Hurts Instead 3c/? coeurdesoleil October 27 2011, 06:44:14 UTC
Oh god, this is wonderful but damn this story hurts to read. Fix them!

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