Five Firsts Challenge - Megatron/Ratchet

Dec 01, 2011 02:46

Title Chaos Theory
Rating: NC17 (for the last part)
Wordcount: 9,085
Universe: Deliberate crazy mashup of G1, IDW, and Bayverse.
Characters: Megatron/Ratchet (with random guest appearances by others)
Warnings: Violence, and mech/mech sticky smut in the last segment.

Notes: This came about from this prompt on the kink meme - in a nutshell, Ratchet ( Read more... )

continuity: idw, megatron, challenge: nov 2011 five firsts, format: fanfiction, ratchet, method: sticky, author: darthneko, continuity: g1

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sister_dear December 1 2011, 08:55:38 UTC
adslfkjsdf Holy shit. The entire thing was amazing. I love it. I love all the details, how you can fill in the blanks for what happened in between, and what wasn't said, and how Ratchet must be so lonely, and how Megatron gets all protective of him. That last scene is icing on the cake. This is going straight to Memories.

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darthneko December 1 2011, 13:42:28 UTC
^___^ Thank you! I'm so glad the greater goings on around them can kind of be inferred. I was worried it might all be totally out of context and I just didn't have time to fill in all the blanks. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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kyliesvillain December 1 2011, 09:28:14 UTC
Gah, this is so damn HOT! *melts*

I really really hope there will be more of this.

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darthneko December 1 2011, 13:44:31 UTC
Thank you! And... yeah. These scenes are a very small part of what promises to be a very very long epic. x____x It started with the porn but then it grew PLOT and Ratchet is determined to stop the war before it ever happens and... yeah. At some point this will be the epic that eats my life.

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gunmaxual December 1 2011, 11:35:43 UTC
I'm-a gonna go up in flames now. POOF. Dat HOT, ya'll!

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darthneko December 1 2011, 13:44:54 UTC
^___^ Hee! Thank you!

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__wilderness__ December 1 2011, 12:53:06 UTC
Guh. I think I adore you. No wait, there's no need to think... I do adore you. The kinkmeme prompt was lovely, and your realisation of it is just absolutely perfect.

I'm going to get in line with all the others requesting more of this!

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darthneko December 1 2011, 13:55:14 UTC
Thank you! ^____^

I... I should probably admit that the prompt is mine. #^_^# I gave it to the meme in the hopes that someone else would do something with it and I could stave off the plot bunnies, but then this challenge came along and, well... I think I'm doomed. The outline alone is 5000 words long and I haven't even finished outlining the main chunk of the plot yet. The scenes in this fic? Probably cover about 300 words of the outline, tops. It's going to be a monster life eating epic (and we won't even discuss the persistent bunnies for a much fluffier sequel x_x). I had NO idea what I was getting into when I thought up this crazy idea.

So yes! There will definitely be more, after I catch up on some of the other meme prompts I'm filling. ^_^

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__wilderness__ December 1 2011, 15:07:16 UTC
*insert squee here*

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white_aster December 1 2011, 13:01:50 UTC
:DDDDDDDDD I love how eventually Ratchet just...gives up on being A Good Boy. Screw this keeping my head down slag! Bring out the wrench! :D

and yes, that last. Mrrrrrrowal;sdkjfsladkjf.

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darthneko December 1 2011, 13:57:48 UTC
They're Decepticons, Ratchet says! Primus, if he can't make Autobots behave without threatening them, what in the Pit made him think being quiet and professional was going to work with Decepticons?! He has to speak their language! They understand the wrench!

Megatron wants to write that evening, now. And that morning, when he had to talk Ratchet into it in the first place. Just for a balanced well rounded scene, of course. =P

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white_aster December 1 2011, 14:10:10 UTC
Of course! Well-balanced scenes are part of a well-balanced fic diet. :D

You mean he had to talk Ratchet into coming and doing the medic thing for this bout? Yeah, I'm sure THAT went over well. Probably capped off by "...you're the only one I trust to do this right." and Ratchet making the >>>___<<< "...dammit" face....

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darthneko December 1 2011, 14:27:14 UTC
LOL! Well, that TOO. It was a death match, which Ratchet has a lot of moral objections to, dammit. =P

(though I meant the last in sequence of the scenes, not the last one you got to read new. Smut before violence! Megatron totally has his priorities straight.)

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