Fic: That Still Small Voice Chapter Four

[lady_oneiros]

I don't like this chapter. But I'm sick of spending all my time arguing with it, so I conceded this battle for the sake of moving on with the story. For what it's worth, I hope you enjoy it.

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is

Comments

[ani_coolgirl]

OOH THERE'S MORE. ~happy jump up and down~

I really liked the whole raven and apple thing. The first thing that popped in my head was: "How's a raven like a writing desk?" and then: "Did you know that Shinigamis like apples?" Yeah, I have weird thoughts.

Can't wait for more!

[lady_oneiros]

Yep, there's more! XD It came kicking and screaming, but it came.

I'm glad you like the raven paradox. I love playing word games and analyzing paradoxes (hence the quote at the beginning of the chapter), so I love to include them whenever I can. I hope to have chapter five up fairly soon. Thanks!

[rianax]

It adds so much depth to your story when you put in these little teasers. It is like reading JK Rowling and playing hunt for the lit reference.

[smart_blonde223]

OOOoooh, I really liked this.

What about green apples?

[lady_oneiros]

Yay! Thank ya very much! I'm glad you liked it.

Green apples work to. Like the paradox states, "if it is not black, then it is not a raven." So even a blue shirt or red necklace increases the likelihood that all ravens are black.

[calger459]

This is very cool so far :D Your writing and characterization is excellent, and I'm very interested in what's going on with Sam. I'm going to go out on a limb and say it's something similar to what happened to his great-grandfather when he encountered Megatron...which can only mean nothing good can come of it ^^;; More fun for us readers! I look forward to more!

[lady_oneiros]

Thank you! I can't tell you too much about what's happening with Sam, but you're right in saying that nothing good can come of it. I'm glad you like it, and thanks for reading!

[twins_eternal]

i just want to say I love you right now XD
the story, the way you write, all the beautiful little details you manage to sneak in here
:gush:
I never even heard about the Old Leather Man or the Raven Paradox before now, and i love you for it <3 <3

And Wheeljack! Everyone's favorite mad-scientist walking disaster!!!

And I still don't know what's going on with Sam, it does occur to me that is right. Ooo poor Sam. ;_;
I wanna do fanart for this fic so bad but everything I've doodled looks like crap ><;; Maybe later....

[lady_oneiros]

Aww, I love you too! ^_^ It means a lot to me that you are enjoying the story...I hope future chapters live up to the expectation. No pressure for me, at all. I'm glad I was able to introduce you to the Raven Paradox--paradoxes are a lot of fun to play with, and I adore them (the reason for the quote at the beginning of the chapter--it's just so fun to mess with people

[twins_eternal]

And just so you know, the very whisper of even the possibility of fanart from you makes me run wildly in circles squeeing at the top of my lungs and keeps me on a high for hours.
Really? Awww <3
::scurries off to work on That Still Small Voice fanart and contest winner pics::

[cazcatharsis]

this fic is too smart for me. LOL.

just kidding, it's just smart enough. any more though and i think i might blow a fuse. :D *sniffs and smells smoke*
damn.

well, as long as sam doesn't start with the Dr. Suess. I do not like green eggs and ham, etc etc... the funked out poetry and, yeah, lovecraftian and sorta Poe-ish gleanings are funky.

ya know, i'll leave the eloquence to the more educated and go with the fangirly route of saying MOAR LYKE GAWD! heh.

*squees for wheeljack!*

[lady_oneiros]

I think I make my own brain blow a fuse at times, to be perfectly honest. No, I don't think Sam will start quoting Dr. Suess, however appropriate it may be (Sam, I am! ....you know, I may have to throw it in to a future chapter, just for you! ~_^). I don't mind the noneloquence, as fangirly squeeing works just fine. I accept chocolate chip cookies, as well.

*joins in squealing for Wheeljack*

[cazcatharsis]

hmmmm.
i wonder if cookies would survive UPS...

ever read the Secret Diaries of Lord of the Rings? There's a line in there I've been dying to use in a fic... "Sam will kill him if he tries anything". :D

[lady_oneiros]

No, I haven't read the Secret Diaries of Lord of the Rings...it sounds cool, though. As for that line, well, I think it sounds like a wonderful thing to use for the very first line of a fic. I hereby challenge you to it: write a story using "Sam will kill him if he tries anything" as the first line. Go, go, go!!!