Fic: That Still Small Voice Chapter Four

[lady_oneiros]

I don't like this chapter. But I'm sick of spending all my time arguing with it, so I conceded this battle for the sake of moving on with the story. For what it's worth, I hope you enjoy it.

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is

Comments

[cazcatharsis]

this fic is too smart for me. LOL.

just kidding, it's just smart enough. any more though and i think i might blow a fuse. :D *sniffs and smells smoke*
damn.

well, as long as sam doesn't start with the Dr. Suess. I do not like green eggs and ham, etc etc... the funked out poetry and, yeah, lovecraftian and sorta Poe-ish gleanings are funky.

ya know, i'll leave the eloquence to the more educated and go with the fangirly route of saying MOAR LYKE GAWD! heh.

*squees for wheeljack!*

[lady_oneiros]

I think I make my own brain blow a fuse at times, to be perfectly honest. No, I don't think Sam will start quoting Dr. Suess, however appropriate it may be (Sam, I am! ....you know, I may have to throw it in to a future chapter, just for you! ~_^). I don't mind the noneloquence, as fangirly squeeing works just fine. I accept chocolate chip cookies, as well.

*joins in squealing for Wheeljack*

[cazcatharsis]

hmmmm.
i wonder if cookies would survive UPS...

ever read the Secret Diaries of Lord of the Rings? There's a line in there I've been dying to use in a fic... "Sam will kill him if he tries anything". :D

[lady_oneiros]

No, I haven't read the Secret Diaries of Lord of the Rings...it sounds cool, though. As for that line, well, I think it sounds like a wonderful thing to use for the very first line of a fic. I hereby challenge you to it: write a story using "Sam will kill him if he tries anything" as the first line. Go, go, go!!!

[cazcatharsis]

oh... shit!

transformers fic virgin here. ummmmm.....

Sudden Death:

"Sam will kill him if he tries anything..."

The two 'hidden' autobots watched as the human named Trent sidled up to Mikaela, bearing a grin worthy of a "World's Sickest Fucko" award. Bumblebee nearly agreed with Jazz's observation, but only if he himself didn't splatter the bastard on the pavement with his fist before Sam could.

They nearly transformed right there and then when Trent went up behind Mikaela and smacked her hard right on the ass, but before the thought could be fully processed, thier proud and pissed off human ally spun on her heel and clocked the big male upside the head with her handbag, screaming
"FUCK OFF!" aaaaaaand without missing a beat went back to talking with her friends.

Jazz nearly lubricated himself laughing while all Bee could think was "Shit, Sam's third in line..."

gods i suck. lol