Fic: That Still Small Voice Chapter Four

[lady_oneiros]

I don't like this chapter. But I'm sick of spending all my time arguing with it, so I conceded this battle for the sake of moving on with the story. For what it's worth, I hope you enjoy it.

Title: That Still Small Voice
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Transformers and all related characters therein do not belong to me. No copyright infringement is

Comments

[animedarkside]

Your fic is absolutely amazing. Seriously. ;_; I feel as though I was reading an actual published novel. The writing is just...wow.

You're doing an outstanding job and I can't wait to read more!

*has an idea of what is going on with Sam but doesn't want to spoil it if she's right* XD Lol.

[lady_oneiros]

Thank ya very much! XD I've been working very hard on improving my writing, so I'm glad you find it well done. I hope to have more up (relatively) soon!

And if you have an idea of what's going on with Sam, that's great, because, really, that's more than what I have. ~_^

[animedarkside]

LOL. xD I can hardly wait!

[siadea]

*gleeps quietly*

Congratulations.

You are writing horror.

It is damn good stuff.

(I caught the ark reference, thank you. All I'm saying is that Sam, you better hope so...)

I love the really creepy thing with Sam scratching at his own palms, and being unable to so much as bring it up to Will. Ah, the creepy!

I have to say, I'm a little nervous about bringing more mechs in, especially into a story that is absolutely pure horror thus far. (In the good way.) Wheeljack especially. I know you won't break the mood with it, and you'll make movie-verse Wheeljack his own character, rather than a carbon copy of G1, but nonetheless I fret! Please, do write more so I can be wowed by your interpretation of Wheeljack instead. *laughs*

[lady_oneiros]

....you know, "gleep" may just be my new favorite word. ^_^ Thank you very much! It means a lot to me that you are enjoying the story. I tend to be better at writing dark stuff, but ask me to write fluff, and that does not work too well. In fact, it ends quite badly. .....really badly.

To be honest, I'm nervous about bringing in other mechs as well, since I'm still not sure I have the original group's characters figured out entirely. But, it's crucial to what I have planned later on, so I'll trust you to kick me in the head if I mess it up even the slightest bit.

I'm looking forward to working with Wheeljack...I can only hope that he feels the same. Thanks again!

[rianax]

Wheeljack is insane curiousity, good cheer, and no sense of personal safety bounded up in a messy little bow.

Think of a Engerizior Bunny with a crazy need to fix things and you have Wheeljack.

And way your story leaves me in awe- the depth, the character, and random Scifi references.

[dragonbloodink]

I linked your fic to my RP buddies over at Survival Earth, and now we're all crying because we'll never be as good as you. You are amazing. Are you a professional writer? If not, you should be.