Great Storyline. Its amazing, how different this story goes compare to what I expected! Its soooo great! I also like the particully and good description of the thinking they got in mind
Thanks so much Chritaja, I'm happy you're enjoying and appreciate you leaving me (Positive, Yay) feedback.
Its amazing, how different this story goes compare to what I expected! Hmmm *ponders*. Of course now you made me wonder what you originally expected LOL.
well I dont know what exactly I had expected, but little bit more begging, hping, wanting, screaming and so on... but what you wrote is far more realistic and detailed..
Just keep on writing! Im waiting for the next chapters even though on the other hand I dont want his story to end!!!!
*grabs toothbrush off floor, rinses it and puts in a nice clean plastic bag in case it's needed later* Because it will be, yes? Please?
And in the meantime... *pinches Orlando good and proper*
Fool.
"How could he risk everything he was? How could he tell his mum he was kissing boys again, tell his family, his management… what would they all think? What would the world think? "
Ok. (1) no job should be 'who you are'. No matter how fabulous the perks. (2) Mum survived the first time. (3) Some of us would be quite keen on the whole thing.
How can I want to look after Michael and clear up his smashed cup and send secretely turn his phone off so he can't speak to nasty foolish Orlando if the so-important-Hollywood-movie-star calls? I adore Orlando. Usually.
"The logical fear of being found out, risking his career was turning into a more innate panic at how to make it through the next hour, a day, how to go on as if nothing had ever happened when if felt as if his life had just stoppedYes young man. You just have a think
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On reflection I should add that Orlando must of course be having a very difficult time with all the issues. And Michael should not have walked out in Scotland. I still love Orlando. And it's only because I want to see him happy that I pinched him that hard.
*Nods* I understand - you can love someone without agreeing with everything they do. They are both morons at times... And, Orlando is not exactly happy either now :(
Careful there! Orlando's Auntie Idlesloth is watching you... don't pinch him too hard. He's.... well, he's Orli *sigh* Michael is staying at my place for a bit. He's very quiet. Oddly enough, he is not drinking much, just doing a lot of staring out of the window and scaring other gym users at the gym. His mobile is switched off, I couldn't help noticing...
Wow, I'm almost blushing from all the kind words and wonderful feedback :)
Thank you so much.
It is my absolute favorite situation to read- when one of the guys just discovers they're gay and if it wasn't for that special person they might never have realized it.
Mine Too. And you're right; there aren't that many where Orlando doesn't know it or hasn't admitted it (he is rather good at turning other's over though I find - but then, who wouldn't be tempted? I mean IT'S Orli!)
I haven't written anything else I'm afraid. This is my first attempt in the wonderful world of slash (or at any other writing for that matter).
Yep, first story so I'm learning as I go along - and I have to say I think I have approved along the way (especially due to my very supportive beta who was kind enough to step in and help out). Although sometimes I think that maybe I was a bit ambitious to start off with something like this... A drabble might have been in order LOL. I'm very glad you like - and though it would, of course, have been great to have comments at the different chapters I'm just mighty pleased you left feedback here.
I'm sure there are more readers than I know of - i hope they like it :)
This story will not be that much longer I don't think (I'm planning about six chapters but we shall see!) and I have nothing else in mind to start on afterwards but maybe inspiration will strike and I will come up with another tale.
I have read Doppelgaenger and agree it was great and very, very sad :( but thanks a lot for the link.
And yes, isn't Michael/Robin lovely. He has this intense gaze in his eyes in some clips that makes me relate him to Michael (OMC).
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Again I CANT WAIT THIS SOTORY TO CONTINUE!!
Best wishes
Chritaja
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Its amazing, how different this story goes compare to what I expected!
Hmmm *ponders*. Of course now you made me wonder what you originally expected LOL.
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well I dont know what exactly I had expected, but little bit more begging, hping, wanting, screaming and so on... but what you wrote is far more realistic and detailed..
Just keep on writing! Im waiting for the next chapters even though on the other hand I dont want his story to end!!!!
Chritaja
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I'll get back to writing.... Thanks
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And in the meantime... *pinches Orlando good and proper*
Fool.
"How could he risk everything he was? How could he tell his mum he was kissing boys again, tell his family, his management… what would they all think? What would the world think? "
Ok. (1) no job should be 'who you are'. No matter how fabulous the perks. (2) Mum survived the first time. (3) Some of us would be quite keen on the whole thing.
How can I want to look after Michael and clear up his smashed cup and send secretely turn his phone off so he can't speak to nasty foolish Orlando if the so-important-Hollywood-movie-star calls? I adore Orlando. Usually.
"The logical fear of being found out, risking his career was turning into a more innate panic at how to make it through the next hour, a day, how to go on as if nothing had ever happened when if felt as if his life had just stoppedYes young man. You just have a think ( ... )
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::tries to cuddle them both despite their being in two separate places and being uncooperative::
::smacks them both in the head for being stupid::
::cries::
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I'll see what I can do to fix it...
Thanks :)
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::whimper::
::big begging puppy dog eyes::
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I sincerely hope for an update soon. I don't know why I've got so stuck - I shall now try to work my way out of the stuckinesssss.....
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Thank you so much.
It is my absolute favorite situation to read- when one of the guys just discovers they're gay and if it wasn't for that special person they might never have realized it.
Mine Too. And you're right; there aren't that many where Orlando doesn't know it or hasn't admitted it (he is rather good at turning other's over though I find - but then, who wouldn't be tempted? I mean IT'S Orli!)
I haven't written anything else I'm afraid. This is my first attempt in the wonderful world of slash (or at any other writing for that matter).
Please friend away.
Thanks again :)
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I'm sure there are more readers than I know of - i hope they like it :)
This story will not be that much longer I don't think (I'm planning about six chapters but we shall see!) and I have nothing else in mind to start on afterwards but maybe inspiration will strike and I will come up with another tale.
I have read Doppelgaenger and agree it was great and very, very sad :( but thanks a lot for the link.
And yes, isn't Michael/Robin lovely. He has this intense gaze in his eyes in some clips that makes me relate him to Michael (OMC).
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Its a brilliant fic!
Cant wait for more.
Lillie
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