The Run Around Part 3 for Chouta Angel!

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Title: The Run Around Part 3
Author: whisper132
Recipient: chouta_angel
Pairing/Characters: Shiraishi/Yukimura, a sprinkling of Jirou/Kirihara, Chitose, Jackal, Osamu
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: This may induce "the feels." If you are uncomfortable with "the feels," please speak to your physician prior to interacting with "the feels."
Disclaimer: If I owned this stuff, the

Comments

[arysthaeniru]

I did not think I needed a idol group!AU called the Run-Around with Kirihara, Jirou, Jackal, Chitose and Shiraishi in it, but now I do, I think I never want to let it go. I am CRYING at the fact that Jackal is both in charge and the only one that can sing, poor bloke, take care of yourself, omg. And Jirou's constant napping...actually makes sense on an idol's schedule, wow. Everything about the entertainment agency is both depressing and hilarious at the same time. Hanamura is absolutely terrifying (and funny) and is probably finally in her natural habitat of manipulating children who cannot escape their contracts :') And Osamu is...more precious than I thought he'd be. He also looks like every CEO of an entertainment industry I've seen, so that works too, hahaha. AND CHITOSE AND HIS STD CHECKS EVERY MONTH JFC CHITOSE YOU BETTER CHARGE HIM THE DOSH, SEIICHI.

And past all those tiny details, onto the actual story. Everything about this was so precious. I loved Shiraishi and Yukimura and how they had the same thought about his white-

[whisper132]

Thanks so much for all your kind words. Because the fic is in three parts (though really not that long) and I haven't written a PoT fic in forever, I was afraid no one would read it or like it. I can't tell you how relieved I was to see your comment and how ridonkulously happy it made me feel to read such kind enthusiasm.

[quelleperedhil]

Anon, I really enjoyed this piece. You beautifully wielded all of those complicated emotions, portraying them powerfully without being so explicit about it. Their relationship grew at a believable pace and I love how they took slow, mutual steps toward each other through the whole story.

[ Like how I popped that zit on your back yesterday and you cried?]

[It was not a zit; it was just a stress expression.]

NOW THAT IS ROMANCE.

[whisper132]

They're both poster children for romance, aren't they? I'm pretty sure there are other equally as romantic texts about Shiraishi's foot fungus and Yukimura's tendency to snort when he laughs really hard.

[chouta_angel]

OMG omg omg omg omgomg omg omg omg omg omg omg

[whisper132]

I totally tried to make you a vampire soulmates fic, but Seiichi refused to cooperate and Kirihara just ran around with fake vampire teeth yelling "Nosferatu! Nosferatu!" After a few good tries and a few good cries, I gave up and this happened. I am super relieved that you didn't hate it.

[monarchist]

This was great. I loved Yukimura's inner thoughts and that he (of course) wore yellow & black scrubs. Shiraishi's attraction being instant, but Yukimura's being more of a slow burn. My gods, anon, I love me a slow burn. (They're the best.) I like that it was more focused on the domestic side of the entertainment life with bits of the job thrown in so we remember that Shiraishi's part of a boyband, I mean, idol group. Also, thank you for making Jirou sassy. I wouldn't like to be woken up constantly either by my bandmates. Also, also Chitose needs to learn to wrap it up.

All in all, excellent work. ♥

[whisper132]

Thanks so much for reading and responding. It really made my day.

I'm pretty sure Chitose is a virgin and is just doing all the tests to maintain his image. Whenever he gets someone into his hotel room, they just play X Box and eat snacks.

[ssumiya]

Oh my gosh this was adorable. I lmao the whole way. This fic is to fucking precious i can't even.... like... Gosh yes this is perfect XDDDD Chitose is the fucking best and Jirou and Akaya and poor poor Jackal and lol yeah this is gold, everything about this. <3

[whisper132]

I don't think I know how to write Jackal without him being put upon by someone. He's just...that way, poor guy. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment!