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[templatemods]

How's My Driving?

So... two months almost to the day, I figure it's time for another one! Time for players to get constructive criticism, en masse, about the characters they play.

A warning before you comment. Honesty is encouraged from those giving criticism or compliments. If someone doesn't think you're playing a character ICly, it is well

Comments

[rendingblast]

RAINA STEALS THE FIRST COMMENT.

Luke [Original] - rendingblast
Balthier [Original] - piratetheskies
Jackie Harkness [Template] - captaininnuendo
Miley Edgeworth [Template] - miniskirtatlaw

[wakamoto]

You know I adore your Balthier!!

And from what I've seen of Miley, she's IC and acts how I think Edgey would act as a woman!

Luke and Jackie I haven't paid much attention to SORRY. ;_;

[ostia]

Sometimes I wonder if you're just keeping Jackie around to have a party animal girl. Now I haven't been able to follow all of her posts/threads, but she never seems to serious up and that's kind of an important part of Jack's personality.

[grazie]

It comes with the territory of having a need to be serious. Besides the police plot, not a lot has happened lately to make her serious.

[pippinto0k]

DAMMIT RAINA.

Reno [original] turkalcoholic
Fred Weasley [original] forgenotgred
Sirius Black [ogrianla] dogged_mischief

I would prefer criticism rather than compliments, by the by. 8[ I'd like to know what I am doing wroooong.

[pippinto0k]

I like your Sirius but maybe you could make him a little.. quieter? There isn't much canon to go off but I still can't see him being that excitable. D:

[forgenotgred]

:O Sure thing! He gets difficult to play sometimes (AT LEAST FOR ME), so I'll take all the help I can get. THANK YOU. ♥

[special_student]

Your Reno is lakjdgklaej A++++ I love him, for reals. Fred, too, I do not know how you guys pull those twins off so fucking well. XD; YOU ARE LIKE THE SAME PERSON.

You have a definitely nonstandard view of Marauders!Sirius, but I like him. It works out well.

[piousmage]

Actually not late for once. Wheee~

Nino [Original] - piousmage
Kirihara Misaki [Original] - section4chief
Neville Longbottom [Original] - mustloveplants

Crit, please? I'm especially worried about Neville because... well... I'm not British. 8[

[sidecharacter]

I'd say about Kirihara, I'd like to see her more proactive. Since she seems so gung-ho in the series to save the day and handle dangerous situations in the like. Do you know what I mean? I think I might need to rewatch the series, but yes. That is what I remember and would like to see more of her kicking ass and taking names. So to speak? ^^;

[section4chief]

Hah, you're completely right. XD I was just thinking about that the other day. It's definitely something I've been failing with and I'll just get right on seeing how I can improve that. NEEDS MOAR ASSKICKING and all that.

Thank you. ♥

[sidecharacter]

Welcome. ^_^

[gredn0tforge]

Merton Dingle [Original] - gothicreverie
George Weasley [Original] - gredn0tforge
Guy Cecil [Original] - justtheservant
K' [Original] - lightyourblaze
Draco Malfoy [Original] - purelineage

I know I'm not perfect- can't fix what's wrong if I don't know what it is, though. :B

[rendingblast]

I like your Guy for the most part, but sometimes I felt it was a problem with Gail that you wouldn't make her perceptive enough. Like she was too clueless at certain things. I haven't seen enough of Guy to see if that will be a problem now, but just letting you know!

I still love you though! D:

[dismentality]

Hmmm, I might be blurring the technology line a bit too much- like, what they might and might not know from their own world? Let me know if you see it with Guy, definitely! I'm normally shaky when I'm still new at playing someone, aka: Gail, so I couldn't tell you either if I'm playing Guy the same way. :|b

ilu2 bb~

[rendingblast]

It's not so much technology as it is the feelings of others around them. Cars? I had my Guy fanboy over them too, I figure pretty much all technology is fair game based on your personal headcanon.

[xgreyfeather]

Riku [Original] - versuslight
Remus Lupin [Original] - moonlitlunacy

[special_student]

I love both of your characters! Haruhi really enjoys Remus.

[einsamer_traum]

Oh man, what else is there to say? Love to the both of your muses. Especially... ... Argh, I can't pick. DX