CONCRIT POST

If there's anything you downright hate about the way I play Sirius, or just something you feel I should improve on, LET ME KNOWWW. Go right ahead and punch me in the face if I'm butchering him for you or some such. Can't fix if I don't know what's wrong, right?

Anonymous is on and comments are screened! Have at thee, young padawans!

[EXCITEMENT he is bursting into James' room, holding a map. One hand is on his back, as well, because le mark is burning and apparently I forgot about that.] Oi! James! I finished part of the-- James? [Hello not!James' room anymore. It takes a moment for the fact that he's gone to set in.]But... no. He's-- then-- then why not send the rest of us ( Read more... )

[HI GUYS REMEMBER ME? Whether it's a light snowfall or not, snow is snow and is snow. Therefore, a black dog that some of you may recall is rolling in said snow and doing... dog-like things, no doubt.]

[Someone is looking cocky AND VERY PROUD OF HIMSELF. |D] It may not have been the clothes-napper, but someone was kissed, at least. And it was rather pleasant, if I might add.

How peculiar. [Holding up a sock, very much identical to the lone sock Remus found.] I wonder how this ended up in my room. And what's this? [Stoops down to pick up a Moony sweater. A few feet ahead of it is yet another sock. AND SO ON AND SO ON.]

Remus! Your clothes-napper has struck again! They've left something of a trail, I suspect.

Right, well, then, James? Remus? What say you men to making that map about now?

[HE IS SMILING VERY INNOCENTLY because his life is at stake at the moment.]

[LOOK A DOG. ON THE SECOND LEVEL. In a park probably somewhere, chasing squirrels and barking at leaves and stealing shoes etc etc etc.]

[Merton is so very lucky to have Sirius for a cousin. Otherwise, Rasputin the Second would never have seen the light of day again. As much light it can get in that Lair of his dear little cousin. Said snake is now outside, in a small clearing of sorts, watched over (albeit carelessly) by Sirius. Who is drinking tea some ways away. 8D]

[Sirius is looking only a lot distressed, slumped outside of Remus' door, behind which one can hear the sounds of a rather unhappy beast. His head is in his hands, occasionally hitting himself with the palm of his hand.]

He's my brother and I forgot ... [It's all mumbled, so if you can actually hear him over the growling noises, you are probably ( Read more... )

[We stoled it from Lily we did, precious, and Sirius is hearing this while he's chasing a couple of those magicked rat toys. And he's singing along, sorry to say. COMPLETE WITH ACTIONS AND EVERYTHING.]