*shifty glance* I was most definitely not lured here by any sort of self promotion...None whatsoever.
This was great. I love Kaiba in Humor "That never stops being funny". Really, there was something almost Whedon-esque about that scene.
And he was downright fucking sexy in First Time. I don't blame Rebecca for wanting to knock boots with him the SECOND he got back.
Hurt/Comfort was super sad. And Fluff was perfectly IC. It's hard to write Fluff with Kaiba, but super secret fluff is a good angle to look at it from.
And Smut was good. I could see them getting all hot and heavy over a game of chess.
I think humor was my favorite. Humor is my comfort zone, after all.
I was a little worried that the smutty scenes seemed a bit technical, but I didn't know if it was actually too technical or if it was because I'd read it twenty times.
The hurt/comfort has been in my head for probably a year, I just haven't had the desire to write it.
Humor and First Time were my overall favorites. The smutty bits weren't so technical that they hindered the flow of the piece. I didn't notice anything different about them, really.
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I'm incapable of a more detailed review right now, but rest assured that reading these was time well-spent.
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I'm glad you liked it, even though you're not familiar with the fandom.
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This was great. I love Kaiba in Humor "That never stops being funny". Really, there was something almost Whedon-esque about that scene.
And he was downright fucking sexy in First Time. I don't blame Rebecca for wanting to knock boots with him the SECOND he got back.
Hurt/Comfort was super sad. And Fluff was perfectly IC. It's hard to write Fluff with Kaiba, but super secret fluff is a good angle to look at it from.
And Smut was good. I could see them getting all hot and heavy over a game of chess.
Overall, a very good job.
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I was a little worried that the smutty scenes seemed a bit technical, but I didn't know if it was actually too technical or if it was because I'd read it twenty times.
The hurt/comfort has been in my head for probably a year, I just haven't had the desire to write it.
Thanks!
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I like Angst a bit myself, too.
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