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wicked_seraph July 15 2009, 23:47:49 UTC
Quite enjoyable! :)

I'm incapable of a more detailed review right now, but rest assured that reading these was time well-spent.

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teh_amazing_one July 15 2009, 23:51:53 UTC
But I want you to pay attention to me!!!!

I'm glad you liked it, even though you're not familiar with the fandom.

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qualapec July 16 2009, 00:40:26 UTC
*shifty glance* I was most definitely not lured here by any sort of self promotion...None whatsoever.

This was great. I love Kaiba in Humor "That never stops being funny". Really, there was something almost Whedon-esque about that scene.

And he was downright fucking sexy in First Time. I don't blame Rebecca for wanting to knock boots with him the SECOND he got back.

Hurt/Comfort was super sad. And Fluff was perfectly IC. It's hard to write Fluff with Kaiba, but super secret fluff is a good angle to look at it from.

And Smut was good. I could see them getting all hot and heavy over a game of chess.

Overall, a very good job.

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teh_amazing_one July 16 2009, 01:10:57 UTC
I think humor was my favorite. Humor is my comfort zone, after all.

I was a little worried that the smutty scenes seemed a bit technical, but I didn't know if it was actually too technical or if it was because I'd read it twenty times.

The hurt/comfort has been in my head for probably a year, I just haven't had the desire to write it.

Thanks!

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qualapec July 16 2009, 01:39:46 UTC
Humor and First Time were my overall favorites. The smutty bits weren't so technical that they hindered the flow of the piece. I didn't notice anything different about them, really.

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teh_amazing_one July 16 2009, 01:43:54 UTC
Well, that's good. They are my favorites, too.

I like Angst a bit myself, too.

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